I want to thank you for a very enjoyable story. I'm glad that you've let Clotho adopt it as it's too good of a story to be abandoned.

For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

http:// w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

Aw, I knew I should have seen this coming... No HP/SS? *Sniff* I couldn't adopt it for I can only write kinks both M/M and M/F... Thus, I need to ask you if you can send me the aurthor who adopts your story line...

Thanks,
DemonVamp

There are stories on this site that are 30 chapters of utter crap. There are authers who write 60 stories of absolute nothing.
You have gold here and you're throwing it away.
Is that ironic or just trajic?

It is interesting so far...

NO! You can't do this to us!

i can't believe your not going to finish this story its bloody brillant

please update

I like this fic. :) It was a bit confusing working out the time travels and all that, so my suggestion would be if you continue this, to edit the previous chapters and add dates or add in cues to the time period in the dialog. I realize you can't give much away in the first chapter, but I think adding dates (think of DrT's format for the Younger Potter Twin, for example) would add information without reducing the dramatic impact :)

Why you never finished the story!? I want to now! XD

hope for your next chapter to update soon. I can't wait to see what is the next action of ash and rowan.

This is such a great story, and I'm really enjoying it...

It has an original plot (which is very hard to find these days), and is very well written.

I love the interaction between the 'twins', and I'm hoping there's a new part soon!

I enjoyed reading this very much!
I'm glad Harry and Tom have finally found family, though I'm still wondering what Tom could have received from Wormtail. Is it animagus transformation?
Connor is fun, you don't have to be a wizard to be slytherin at heart.
I'm looking forward to the update!

Great story you now have me hooked on three of your stories.

I'm loving it so far. Keep up the good work.

Happy Writing!
: )
sarini