aw so sweet!

nice I loved it you did a really good job with this one shot
sarina

Kawaii~! x3
Uh, not much to say that has already been said...
o.o;;

cute. very well written

AH!omfg I LOVED THIS!
this was really good!definate fav from me!

At least Deidara wasn’t a ** for the sake of being a **.

Best. Line. Ever. That totally describes Sasori!

And aww! That was sweet . . .

xD Pure Yaoiness~ Luv it

Cute story! I like this pairing! Deidara and Tobi are cute! Loved the story! Good job!

woohoo! Yes. Tobi is a good boy. XD m...the joys of a shower. heh I must say, I do enjoy your writings. ^^

Well, that was... my new favorite TobiDei story! I like the light smexy scenes better than the full blown... well, you know. You did an awesome job! Would you consider writing another pairing too? You have a great talent! 122/100
~BlackRoseOfTheGrave

amazing! i loved it! so exciting and enticing ^^

- Sabaku no Bri

wow that was so god damned adorable! in a kinda perverted way wow it was so awesome i would love to read more of your work so please write some more Tobi dei fics ^^

Haha good, smutty, little Tobi xD
Nice one ;D

*Drool* I'm going to blunt here... that was HOT!

Awesome. It was cute and, I'd have to say, adorable. I hope I'm not the only one that thinks that. But please write more!