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| CobaltHeart 2008-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseI think that is a good idea. In almost every fanfic Naruto is there when Sasuke wakes up or hes the one who brings him back. That or it takes place when Sasuke is still a rogue. |
| Asterisks 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseHa! that's great. I'd love to read another story in that situation. |
| StDogbert 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseAh, young love. After watching far too much Naruto, I can see where people come up with all the man-love stories. Naruto and Sasuke are just WAY to aware of each other, if you know what I mean. Anyhoo, good story. I like that you let Sakura grow up and not still be the clingy twerp she was before. Thanks for that. |
| lotus-bugxm9 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story!!:D The Naruto/Sasuke friendship is somthing very strang indeed, but the underlining fact remains those two care for eachother deeply no matter what has happend between them as i;m a full believer it is a way more brotherly love/hate/weep sort of relationship then anything else,and your story kinda to me really showed that in a great way for that was some cleaver work you wrote down there girly so way to go!! And if you ever tend to make this a more then one chapter story that would be so cool for how it's left off just makes you want to know more for the up coming akward/reuion coversation they would have would be killer!!:-) added Sakura in the lot. |
| Zetnnik 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseNice! Hope you'll write more on this story... Can you make it just a friendship fic though, non Yaoi? |
| chen 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this was so wonderful and beautifully written and just perfect.. exactly how it should be.. exactly how it is. because it's hard to explain the SasukeNaruto relationship.. not the mushy couple you get on most fanfiction (which I love reading, if only because it's nice to dream) but it's also something so much stronger than any friendship.. and yes, I'd LOVE to see a multi chapter.. and I'd love to see more Sasuke and Naruto from you.. I'll be watching you :] |
| Dolphingirl32173 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseSarah: *laughs* i'm hoping that it's Naru-kun that she's referring to. |
| Arlaikeeno 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWEll done! |
| nates 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness, this was written so wonderfully. I love that after all these years, Sakura, Sasuke and it's that not-quite perfect that makes them team 7. |
| jinsane226 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abusei think you should write a multi-chapter on it...it would be funny if naruto beat sasuke up while he was still in the hospital bed though, i mean could you blame him if he did? |
| M. 2007-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is VERY interesting! To be honest I never thought anyone BUT Naruto would bring the angsty little Teme back. I really hope you continue this. There's simply far too many delicious angst and stuff to play with. :-) Great fic! |
| gare de lyon 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abusethat was pretty cool, yep; pretty coolio indeed keep it up |
| hink 2007-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abusenice. you should continue it. sakura seemed too ooc though. she was hardly as you described her in shippuden, and honestly in three years she'd be 15; don't think she'd get all the grace and poise and whatnot by then, if ever. |
| Yuuka-chan 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseWell, that shows it! Sasuke really cares for Naruto, no matter what the differences. Chee, slash on! *chuckle* Great story. Though I'd enjoy reading a few more chapters... Hehe, that's a thin hint) |
| MAB LuvR 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abusei like it. very well thought out, everyone's in character, pace is steady, and the intro doesn't do the whole ''and today was sucha lovely day'' thing. PROPS TO YOU!! ;P |