You are such a god at writing. xD
How lucky am I to find that you like all the pairing I do?
ShikaTema, especially.

*contended sigh*

Maelynne Naveen,

I'm still recovering from the mesmerising effect your story cast on me! Wow this's certainly a classic for me. Many years down the road, my obsession with awesome writing will definitely entice me back to this gorgeous, wondrous, sensuous epitome of perfection. Definitely one of the most flawless I've read so far. Wish I'd come across this earlier!

Your characters were assimilated impeccably, and the plot was everything I've ever dreamed of in longing for ShikaTema to happen. Beautiful pace, progression and events!

Awesome style, great play on words, stunning analogies, just the right touch of amusement coupled with logic, powerful language! With the simplest descriptions and the fewest words, you've managed a very impressive story. Every line left a distinct impression on me and made me nod my head or grin in glee, particularly the begining paragraphs and that intellectual last line. You've totally won me over!

Thanks a million, Maelynne Naveen, for making my fantasies come alive!

He thinks it would be troublesome to have to correct everyone? Lol!

I heart this pairing. Cute and IC.

Good job.

KSM

Wow. That was really good. It's my new fave pairing no less!

pretty

Took them long enough. Fav pairing! *gives cookies*

good story

totally adorible! I loved it!!

I like...

Very good, very well written. Amazing romance scene. Like wow, you almost WANT to be Temari! ^__^; heh. The hint at the end of the chapter makes you grin too, and i can't help but think "Tch, cheeky Shikamaru and Temari!" XD

Once again I shall say- very nice!

Take care!

Great one. Hahaha. Who would've thought Temari would receive the third degree? Now i begin to wonder how will Shikamaru take the third degree? >=)

Very nicely done. Don't worry about using the shadow possession trick, it's the funnest way to get the two of them together. Both characters seemed to be kept in character. It is a very enjoyable story.

Good ^^ it was cute and very...umm, ...real? Is that the right word? Great couple ^^

AKS

Me plus this story equals the loving of it.

Well-written, concise, cute. Believeable. Everybody does Temari wrong but you.

Aw! That was really sweet and both were kept firmly IC. Thanks for sharing!!