I have to say I haven't read a lot of B/V one-shots (if any!) but yours was beutiful, you managed to write an incredible fanfiction using an over-used plot (what did happen in those three years?), I don't care if you wrote this almost 4 years ago, it was GREAT!

I hated the ending, tho! XD

My favortie part: "... mean- Chichi’s only slapped me once, after I came back from space. I think… I THINK it was because I had left her alone for over two years.”

LOL That Goku...

Kuuipo means beloved and sweetheart in hawaiian. That was great story. I guess that fits perfectly with the two years everyone was it shows both bulma and vegeta w/out some outrageous character changes.

very enjoyable

wow... that was awesome... so beautiful... so romantic... so in character... well done.

wwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooo

That was SO AWESOME! Write more stories, PLEASE! You're so awesome! -Miki-chan.

I jsut realized i didn't ahve a disclaimer... so...err...i don't own it and uh... PELASEDON'TSUEMETHANKYOU!

I love your story .. a bit confusing though cause you skiped around I reall wanted to see how the chess game ended and when Bulma was running away from Vegeta I would of loved to see how that ended.. But oh well . AHH I LOVE DUO SAMA AND TASUKI .. Im not to found of Nuriko .. I like Anime guys with braids and all but .. the I mean with the purple hair and his little obssesion with Hotohori ..its a little to much for me .. But it was so sad when Nurkio died .. it had me in tears .. * Inukice clenches her fists * OH I COULD KILL THAT ASHITAR! .. but of course Nakago took care of that for me so I dont have to * Grins * OH AND I LOVE TASUKI .. I love his fangs and how he always burns Tamahome first then the bad guy . Oh I also love Kouji Tasuki's best friend when he was still with the bandits .. OMG I LOVED HOW KOUJI WOULD TALK TO HISELF BEFOR ENTERING A ROOM .. AND HOW HE A TASUKI WOULD ALWAYS DO THEIR LITTLE DANCE .. I LOVE THEM THEIR SO CUTE ! * Grins * Well anyway I hope you make a sequal to your story or more chapters I really loved it noda .. Oh and chichiril is cute too noda along with Tamahome !

I loved the 'flashbacks' rather than one drawn out story. Great idea!

This is kinda interesting. Somewhat different to usual B/V fics

WOW! That was too good and both Bulma and Vegita remained in character too. Love the chess game, loved the chase. Totally another take on B/V but totally welcome. Dare I say, please write more. Would love to see your take on Vegita's reaction to having a son, through the Cell games, heck write about the Buu saga as well.

cool. sad but cool

Very Enjoyable!

I loved the skipping segments. I loved the language. The humor was spot on. Very well written, not something you find everyday in cartoon fan fiction, ne?

You have a gift. Please keep writing wonderful fiction for us!

Goku's Girl

Awww! That was so incredibly sweet! I loved it!

Ahhhh! So refreshing! It would really be cool to see you fill in the gaps! Loved your story, always happy to see an innovative take on the whole b/v missing years thing!