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| Youkai-ChoGonou 2008-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseOh, this was so cute! I just love Kubota swooping in at the right moment near the end to rescue Tokito. And "Tokitoh breaks things to make them work. But I break things to make them broken. It would be good to remember that." was a beautiful little calm threat! |
| Kitty Meow 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseUwa this is a very very nice lil fic XD I absolutely love how you've portrayed the characters kekeke poor Tokito is just so very cute despite (or perhaps because??) of his violent tendencies. Oh and the scene with Tachibana was just delicious XD It was something I could vividly see occurring in the actual Executive Committee verse: a tantalizing glimpse at yaoi without any truly overt mentions. Though of course, this fic is much more yaoi-ful *drools* And as far as the fic goes, I must commend you on your powerful use of dialogue. There is so much said, that isn't actually said. It complements your characterizations very well ^^ Plot-wise, I absolutely LOVE the end!! Ahahaha oh Kubo-chan XD "...But it wasn't Tokitoh who broke it" Ahahaha just classic. Overall, a very wonderfully done!! I can't wait to take a peek at your other fics ^^ |
| Darkyu 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was a GOOD oneshot! I'm happy that I had a chance to read it. The characters' personalitys were exactly like the ones of the manga/OVAS! You are a great writer. Hope you will write more EC fics! n.n See ya! |
| silver-eyed 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusewell, great fic, like this a lot. that creep, good thing that kubota got there in time ( i haven't read EC yet so i don't know really what's going on) but i like the story anyway. keep it up! |
| lybra323 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOh you're writing again! Thank you so much! You've made my day. Nobody can quite do WA/EC fic like you do. And just when I'm in desperate need of some EC fic too~ I love your double entendre and how the story unfolds, revealing layers under layers like an onion, and yet staying true to the essence. You've captured them beautifully as usual, and I love it! That was a real treat ^__^ |
| Kurama Barton 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nice characterization, IMO faithful to the characters' behavior =). i also enjoyed the flow of the fic. Actually you remind me of Minekura-sensei's way of writing mini-stories =D. keep up the good job! |
| Kaoro Tsumi 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuse"Tokitoh breaks things to make them work. But I break things to make them broken." Hahahah ! Very good and cute ! Oh, how I love threatening and jealous Kubota ^^. Nice One-shot ! |
| Sherry Marie 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome, just like all of your past fics. ^_^ |