This was cute. I love Leo and Raph.

Nice! I like it. And your writing in general. ^_^

But is the one with the bats Leo or Raph? Since the blackmail comment could refer to Raph but as far as I know Leo and Splinter are the only ones that would have Chinese lamps; the rest could refer to both. (could you tell me that?)
Or that's how I see it.

At first I thought the bat was a mutant monster. But then there were a lot of "aww" moments. I love bats! And mushy Raph moments! Hmm...let's call them MRM now, does that sound good? :P

Aw! Loved it! Poor Leo- nothing like having something small and slightly evil-looking latch onto your leg at 4AM! :D And loved Raph's mushyness! And the bat and the apple juice *Squees*

Anyway, great ficlet and the end sentence was perfect!
:D
AZ

Jack and Jill are awesome names! ^^

Baby bats! *squee* Reminds me of the baby bat that flew into my apartment last year. ^^ Love seeing Raph's softer side, and Leo being spastic for a change. :)

Aww!! That's really the only word I can think to describe this. I always knew Raph had a mushy side and it's nice to see it portrayed more often.

At first I thought this was some kind of horror story and those little red eyes belonged to a monster or something. Nice job of keeping us in suspence. I'm not sure what the challenge was but this is one heck of a great story. ^_^

I first saw this on Stealthy Stories (where I lurk, for now) and was surprised that this only got an honorable mention. It was one of my three favorites in the competition, and I thought it deserved at least third place, preferably second. In short, I love this story, and appreciate any fic featuring non-arguing Leo and Raph. What's more, bats are incredible animals that I've loved since childhood, so any story featuring them is great to read.