Reviews for Jurassic Park: Stand Alone

reddragonn343 2007-08-05 ch 8,	abusehey...this is cool..
satans-sister7 2007-08-04 ch 8,	abuseEnjoying the story so far. Loved this line "Pay back is a **." I'm sure you've heard about your' spelling mistakes and all that, but don't worry, we all make mistakes don't we, and it's the subtance of the story that counts. More Please.
Obi's Second Cousin 2007-07-19 ch 3,	abuseStory seems good but the spelling mistakes are making my eyes twitch. 'Tooken'? 'Pasted'? I think you want 'taken' and 'past'.
vinny2 2007-06-26 ch 5,	abuseGood solid chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
vinny2 2007-06-22 ch 4,	abuseI'm really impressed with this story, mainly becuase you're not trying to rush the dinosaur action just for the sake of having dinosaur action. I'm glad you took a good four chapter to let the readers get a feel of your characters. When dino action is rushed, I'm left wondering about the characters and don't sympethize when they die. I'm really glad to see you're not doing that. Now that the plane has landed, I really am interested in the next step. No doubt that Burton is going to try something. I'll be waiting for chapter 5.
vinny2 2007-06-20 ch 2,	abuseThis stopry has some good potential. My only hope is that you don't rush it and leave some questions unanswered, like how'd they get the uzis on board. That's a question better answered sooner rather than later.