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| Ghost Wulf 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That was absolutely chilling but it was beautifully written. I think you captured Xanatos's personality perfectly. And I agree, I never thought his death was completely in character. I hope to read more from you and this is definitely going on my favorites list. |
| Nelarun 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOh wow... this was brilliant! I loved it! Nela |
| Shi-Ahn 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseLOVED IT! It was so sad that Obi-Wan died, but Xan will pay for it in the end. I loved the way it played out and leaving it open for the next round between Qui-Gon and Xan. Thanks and keep up the good work. |
| PeaceGuardian 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI really like the story |
| an-angel-in-hell 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseCompletely fantastic! Easily one of the best JA fics I've ever read. Your characterization of Xan is chillingly realistic. A superb AU, although I can't help but wonder if Qui would REALLY sacrifice Obi to destroy Xan. I agree with you, though, that Xan's suicide was woefully OOC. He ALWAYS had a back door, and although I know it was supposed to be the point that in that instance he DIDN'T (or rather, it failed to work), I always hoped he'd show up again. If he was going to, though, I guess he would've by now. I had hope for Granta Omega, but he turned out to be a COMPLETE disgrace. I won't give anything away, though, in case you've not read Jedi Quest. |
| Kaelir of Lorien 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAn extremely well-written story! Your descriptions are fantastic and I love how the story is from "Xan"'s point of view. You portrayed his character perfectly, right down to those mocking taunts (love those). I feel so bad for Qui-Gon (he's one of my favorite characters). |
| Justice of the People 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAn excellent story. Your voice is strong and your details are perfect. I love Xanatos, and you nailed his character completely. It was depressing, but I feel like that's the emotion you were going for. Amazing job. |
| musingpadawan 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAk! Obi-Wan! :'( That was so sad!! But well done! :) |
| Annette-The-Frog 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abusewow that was... sad really well done.. but so sad |
| Kelev 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAww, you killed poor Obi-Wan! You are right though, Xanatos is a realist, and I think he really wouldn't have jumped in the pool, he would have run like before. Sad tale though. |
| Ann Jinn 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseSuch a sad tale. A good take on how the story ends and more in the character of Xantos than the original. The imagery of the death in the area, acid springs, dead trees, corpses is fantastic. |