I LOVE this chapter! Aww, poor "Ronniekins".
HERON FOREVER!
-NuDgE

Hahahaha that was really funny. Great job.

"…A book?"

"Yes, Ron, a book. Believe it or not, they aren't all useless."

and

"…Ronald, how much have you had?"

"Try two bottles, and you'll be close."

"Not so, Fred! I have had…. two… AND A HALF!"

"I'M GEORGE, DAMMIT!"

and

"No, Charlie, you're just blind. And a defeatist!"

"I thought I was a pessimist."

HOHO! This makes me laugh so much. Make another!! Your great...

Alica x

XD

I love Fred and George so much!! *sobs*


This is awesome! ^_^

That's probably exactly what happened. Love the stories and I can't wait for more.

You said "ass of doom." I am now yours. I will review every chapter. I will acutally manage to read the ENTIRE chapter! And I can guareentee that I will laugh every chapter. I feel the love for this fic welling up inside of me like Ron felt the (two and half bottles of) Firewhisky. Update soon. Until then, my computor screen pines.
Have I mentioned that I am writing a fic about George and am now stuck writing just like him? Just so you know. :D

Two reviews in a row... let's just say i'm hooked.

Not that i didn't enjoy the other chapters, but i'm thinking four reviews in a row...a bit pathetic. As if i have any dignity left where harry potter is concerned anyway.

But yes, again with how much i love the twins, and the teasing is classic. I wish we got to see some of this stuff in the actual books. Alas, that opportunity is gone forever now...

"I'm not looking for fairness, I'm looking for a bit of a break. Ginny is really obvious with her crush on Harry! I-"

"Admit that I have a thing for Miss Granger the size of the Hogwarts lake?"

This will have to suffice now. and i think it will do quite nicely.

So the all-dialogue thing was kinda confusing, but in a good way, kept me on my toes.

And plus this is pretty much awesome. And by pretty much i am downplaying its awesomeness very much. Because Drunk Ron is awesome. And so are the twins. Oh how i will miss my dear sweet boys...

"George is sobbing in the loo about how no one knows who he is, Ginny. I'm Fred."

Ah I really really like this. I too find writing dialogue comes naturally and the in-between bits hard so I get why you wrote it like this; and it works because you have an excellent flair for said dialogue.

This line;

"A flash of hope! See it die!"

in partiuclar really made me laugh.

One question though - ever considered writing in script form? It might make a little clearer to some and doesn't require much in the way of description.

write some more!

love it :D really maked you miss fred...

update please?

*ROFL* THat was great. Wonderful twinly-ness to make them live again. I wonder if George will start talking to himself now. I'm so sad :(

The dialouges are funny. You should do one with Harry and Ginny and probably the rest of the Weasley family. That would be cool.

Very nice. :D

And I think the dailoge-only thing is working very well (moreso than in most fics, actually).

No Tonks? You tease. But that's okay.

I like reading about the Marauder days. They were a tight knit group of mischievous boys, that's for sure. It's nice to see what people were like before they met tragedy and war.