It was really good almost to good for word but it was also very sad

wow. that was truly intense. and depressing. i'll have to read it again, but i wanted to say right away that i loved it. fantastic job. you're a really good writer, honestly.

thank you for writing this,
--kyra

oh my gosh... that's depressing... it's so good! but now i'm going to cry... :(

hmm... very suspenseful...

Oh my God... How sad. I swear it, I'm crying. This is beautifully written, and painfully sad. Good job..Wow..

Max killed her self to save the world what the h-e-double hockey sticks

Amazing. Your story is a beatiful literary piece and I enjoyed every word. I loved the end even if it was tragic. Your descriptions were like poetry and all I wanted was to read more. If you ever get the chance, I would love to read a sequel.

*cry, cry* Oh... My... God. Wow. I don't knnow what else to say.

Wow...

I'm kind of speechless right now, that was so amazing.

All the descriptive language really added to the overall intensity of the story, as did the lack of names. The only place where that effect wore off a bit was "The guy's eyes snapped open in horror." I think it's just the fact that you used the word guy, when previously the language was so sophisticated.

Okay, so maybe I'm not speechless anymore. (sorry)

That was really, really amazing, but I don't think you should add anything to it because it might throw off the effect, but more oneshots from you would be great.

wow. this is a really good story. and your writing skills are amazing..please have more to it please please please :]

Wow, that was really good. Sad, depressing, but very, very good. I liked it!
O.G.

Whoa. REALLY DARK. But I like. I like a lot.

This is really good, your writing is really mature (for lack of a better word) Oh and plz update your other Twilight fic that you haven;t updated in 4 months!!

Oh god. It is so sad. I cant believe it...gosh! I love it though and I think you are totally brilliant and original. Good job...you almost made me cry.

omg I love it. Please tell me your going to make this into a two shot, or something. because that's jsut a wow, ending. I love it btw. Great writing.