Clever, if a bit less harsh on Eragon than I would have liked. But nicely done all the same.

What?! Pern and Star Wars, interesting...
keep writing please!
cliffhangers, i hate u
please please please please please keep writing!

Well, Eragon is pretty much Star Wars set in Middle Earth, so...

Nice work.

*snort* You're either an Anti-Shur'tugal, or you should become one. Geez, that's wonderful. The second-to-last paragraph was spot-on description of the Jedi... and of the mimickry that the Dragon Riders are. Wonderful Dragon Riders of Pern ref...geez. I knew WHAT this fic was when I saw the 'man in black' in the story... geez, we need more satire. XD!

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*ESPECIALLY* TO ANTI-SHUR'TUGALS!

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-Death of the Riders

Nice. I thought that it was Aragorn at first because that scene reminded me of the scene where Frodo, Sam, Merry, and Pippin first saw him, but then I realized it was Luke. I loved all the subtle inferences that Eragon is like Star Wars and other books and movies. This was really good.

Ahah! Oh my! That was really interesting. You had me guessing up to the very end as to who (and what) those two were. I wonder though, WHO they were. *grin* Well done! *thumbs up*

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