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FogandSpyglass
2009-07-18 . chapter 12
Jimimothimothy...what can I say?
I loved the technicolour smex and that House described Cuddy's 'counselling' as technicolour also. In my mind this points to both her repressed gayosity and the 'to blathe'(princess bride anyone?) of House/Wilson. House was so wonderfully sardonic and with that rapier wit that he slashes the unarmed with(do you slash with rapiers? I jolly well hope so[after all, one can slash anything else *winks*]). I may have to steal House's cane and Vicodin and lure him towards a box, in which, of course, Wilson will be tied up. I will then seal the box and- *pulls box from under table* oh look! Here's one I made earlier! *shakes box to sounds of surprise, cursing and interrupted smex*

I also love how subtly American this is. The 'eighth grade' comment about MRS. NERG, everything! It just slotted perfectly into place and made the fic that little extra bit better. :)

I will now pretend that I understand con-crit.

I noticed a few mini typos in chap 12 in the heart to heart paragraph towards the end. And, of course, being a completely hypocritical pedant, I had to point it out while making mistakes of my own. I was mildly confused by the beginning when Gay Chicken gets out of hand. It went too fast for me. But then again, loci g Lestrade as I do, I must have picked up his habit of -total fail- regards keeping up with things. (though not keeping things up :E)
Ohnoicky
2008-08-26 . chapter 11
Well written! Very in character.
Tusk Of Thyme
2008-07-22 . chapter 11
nu don't leave it there!!
BEautifully written, just so you know. I love your usage of vocabulary
Sophia Riddle
2008-03-30 . chapter 9
please, tell me, you hace more right? I have a feeling this would got more than this, anyway, a very good story it is~
FluffySmarts
2007-12-17 . chapter 9
oh.
the last paragraph is so adorable. sexi.


loved it!
Tusk Of Thyme
2007-12-06 . chapter 9
God, I don't know If I've ever told you but this is my favourite story on this entire site.
ReeMaria
2007-12-03 . chapter 8
AH! Seriously? It ends like that? Poor Wilson! I want to give him a hug. Any chance of a sequel or something? Some happy ending? *hopeful look*
orionhunter
2007-12-03 . chapter 8
Jimmy, how could you? And I thought that you were so sweet and innocent. Good slash though. Keep writing the stories and I shall force your husband to read them
FluffySmarts
2007-12-03 . chapter 8
no he cant give up!

where are you getting this!
thats the last thing he should be doing!
gr.

but okay.
i trust you.
just please update SON with LONGER chapters! thanks
Fern-Knight
2007-11-06 . chapter 6
*is amazed and inspired* I loved it!
B.A.D.Child
2007-10-30 . chapter 6
O spunky I like it it's all pretty colors
Lord of the Shadows
2007-10-17 . chapter 6
Wow. Aw, poor Wilson. He needs some nice, detailed sex with House right about now. Yep, I'd say that's just about right.

Very nice.
FluffySmarts
2007-08-20 . chapter 4
aw super cutee

update soon
Tusk Of Thyme
2007-08-04 . chapter 4
more more more!
IzzBella91
2007-07-30 . chapter 4
Ah, cute fic. I like that it wasn't really heavy on the slash (though I do tend to enjoy that)- just more of like a drunken night- which is always lots of fun to read.
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