 FogandSpyglass 2009-07-18 . chapter 12Jimimothimothy...what can I say?
I loved the technicolour smex and that House described Cuddy's 'counselling' as technicolour also. In my mind this points to both her repressed gayosity and the 'to blathe'(princess bride anyone?) of House/Wilson. House was so wonderfully sardonic and with that rapier wit that he slashes the unarmed with(do you slash with rapiers? I jolly well hope so[after all, one can slash anything else *winks*]). I may have to steal House's cane and Vicodin and lure him towards a box, in which, of course, Wilson will be tied up. I will then seal the box and- *pulls box from under table* oh look! Here's one I made earlier! *shakes box to sounds of surprise, cursing and interrupted smex*
I also love how subtly American this is. The 'eighth grade' comment about MRS. NERG, everything! It just slotted perfectly into place and made the fic that little extra bit better. :)
I will now pretend that I understand con-crit.
I noticed a few mini typos in chap 12 in the heart to heart paragraph towards the end. And, of course, being a completely hypocritical pedant, I had to point it out while making mistakes of my own. I was mildly confused by the beginning when Gay Chicken gets out of hand. It went too fast for me. But then again, loci g Lestrade as I do, I must have picked up his habit of -total fail- regards keeping up with things. (though not keeping things up :E) |
 Ohnoicky 2008-08-26 . chapter 11Well written! Very in character. |
 Tusk Of Thyme 2008-07-22 . chapter 11nu don't leave it there!!
BEautifully written, just so you know. I love your usage of vocabulary |
 Sophia Riddle 2008-03-30 . chapter 9please, tell me, you hace more right? I have a feeling this would got more than this, anyway, a very good story it is~ |
 FluffySmarts 2007-12-17 . chapter 9oh.
the last paragraph is so adorable. sexi.
loved it! |
 Tusk Of Thyme 2007-12-06 . chapter 9God, I don't know If I've ever told you but this is my favourite story on this entire site. |
 ReeMaria 2007-12-03 . chapter 8AH! Seriously? It ends like that? Poor Wilson! I want to give him a hug. Any chance of a sequel or something? Some happy ending? *hopeful look* |
 orionhunter 2007-12-03 . chapter 8Jimmy, how could you? And I thought that you were so sweet and innocent. Good slash though. Keep writing the stories and I shall force your husband to read them |
 FluffySmarts 2007-12-03 . chapter 8no he cant give up!
where are you getting this!
thats the last thing he should be doing!
gr.
but okay.
i trust you.
just please update SON with LONGER chapters! thanks |
 Fern-Knight 2007-11-06 . chapter 6*is amazed and inspired* I loved it! |
 B.A.D.Child 2007-10-30 . chapter 6O spunky I like it it's all pretty colors |
 Lord of the Shadows 2007-10-17 . chapter 6Wow. Aw, poor Wilson. He needs some nice, detailed sex with House right about now. Yep, I'd say that's just about right.
Very nice. |
 FluffySmarts 2007-08-20 . chapter 4aw super cutee
update soon |
 Tusk Of Thyme 2007-08-04 . chapter 4more more more! |
 IzzBella91 2007-07-30 . chapter 4Ah, cute fic. I like that it wasn't really heavy on the slash (though I do tend to enjoy that)- just more of like a drunken night- which is always lots of fun to read. |