i know this is a little late but in the future instead of using handicap the proper term is disability. No I'm not disabled, but my mom works with people who are and she says that saying handicap is disrespectful

Bella killing humans is natural as she is a vamp. I appreciate the authenticity.

i like very mutch your story. Thank you

One thing that I noticed when Jasper was giving the Love talk was that when a person makes their signs sharp and fast they are not showing egarness they are actually yelling. To show eagarness or to make something more important is all in the expression on someones face. Any who loved the story it was really captivating.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU ARE ONLY 16. THIS STORY SHOWS SO MUCH TALENT, I AM REALLY ENVIOUS.WHAT IS REALLY IMPRESSIVE IS THE FACT THAT YOU DIDN'T RESORT TO WHAT I CALL ,'SEX SMUT' TO GET YOUR STORY LINE ACROSS. YOU HAVE WRITTEN A BEAUTIFUL TALE FULL OF EMOTION AND YOUR DESCRIPTIONS OF THOSE FEELINGS REALLY PULLED ON MY HEART STRINGS.YOU ACTUALLY MADE ME FEEL WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO LIVE WITHOUT THAT MOST BASIC SENSE- HEARING.I ALWAYS THOUGHT MY SIGHT WAS THE MOST IMPORTANT ,BUT AFTER YOUR STORY I HAVE TRIED TO IMAGINE LIVING IN A WORLD WITHOUT SOUND, AND MAYBE IT WOULD BE ALMOST AS BAD. THANK YOU AGAIN FOR AN INCREDIBLE READ AND GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR FUTURE. SHAZA

So sweet. Love the way that you are allowing Edward's need to protect and guide Bella shine through in a different way from the original Twilight.

Their love, is so pure and gentle and vibrates of the page - its just so beautiful to read. Thank you. :D

Wow. The gentle and pure the feelings between Edward and Bella brings tears to my eyes - you write so beautifully. :)

I keep waiting for reality to strike a jarring note!! :(

What a wonderful, heartbreaking story - poor, Bella.

Love that although Bella is a vampire, she still needs the support and guidance of the Cullens - especially Edward.

I really love your story! There are very few rated T stories I come by that are well written as yours is. I love your originality and overall flow of this story it makes axious just to see what the next chapter holds.
Great chapter/

Very nice story, very different.

you should do a sequal. what happens after, i mean james wanted her, what if he found out who she really was because victoia was gone huh huh why don't you continue

Hi,

I just wanted to let you know I loved your story. Keep writing.

WOW, awesome story! Very well written and interesting plot line. I like the "legend of haunted Bella" idea.
No sequel? What's going to happen to Bella and Edward now?

Wow, I'm impressed with how you explained Bella's situation knowing that she can't hear.

This story is amazing. I don't know how to describe it t you. It was very well written, and it must have been hard to write Bella's point of view when she was deaf. But you did such an amazing job! I am sad that it is over.