Never... too... much... sex. *evil cackle*

the plot thickens hah!

not ready hahahaha i love it!

AHAHAHAHAHA
You're evil...and Genma's a perv and Raidou's a perv by association.

You're gonna make my slow ** computer load another page before I can read the smex! ARGH! Silly, Iruka. That confession wasn't nearly as monumental as he was making it.

Hayate! Makes me sad to think of him. I might even be a Hayate fangirl.
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I thought it was weird that there was never a mention of pregnancy. Now, I wish I hadn't wished for it. God, that was sad. I didn't see it coming until Kakashi cried and I was like, "**! Baby!"

Yeah I definately would have killed if you cut it off...well not really since all I have to do is hit the button for the next page. What was at that party?

Nice Kiba stuff. I'm still wondering about Genma and Raidou's bracelets though. I've never heard anything like it.

YAY A VD!
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I mean..ehem...When you started talking about Iruka's exploits it hit me. "How the hell does he not have like ghonasyphaherpilades...or whatever."
Poor Hinata. Then again, with her choice of music...

I don't want to insult you so please please don't take this first comment as an insult because it's only to explain why the next means so much.

You are an amazing FANFICTION writer. You're writing style good and enjoyable but would never pass the grade professionally.

BUT

You're ideas are original and brillient and you are NEVER afraid to take the story where it needs to go. Your chracters a real in every sense of the word and you give us an emotional experiace when you write that is undeniable and unbelievably authentic. Thank you for this story. Thank you for you writing and efforts and thank you so so much for the tears this chapter's end gave to me.

saint

*laughs* very cute and very amusing.

Despite never being so much as interested in the rave scene this piece is really fascinating. I guess cuz I liked Mizuki's box so much.

cant wait for your next update

It's over! TT_TT

But it was really nice, you know. (I wish someone would randomly come over to my house and give me a massage, I'm so sore!)

...Which reminds me of Gai and his amazing massage skills. Hahaha, it seems he's good for something.

Poor Genma and Raidou! How badly did he scare them?