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Blissfully Disturbed
2008-04-26
ch 4,
abuseWow, they needed a drug to knock her out and calm her down. Reminds me of Anemone in Eureka 7 though she gets a little crazy if she doesn't take them often.
Blissfully Disturbed
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseHmm... Nice beginning. Reminds me of something. *Keeps eye on story*
dasfds
2008-03-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseAW SO SWEET LOLOLOL
Taeniaea
2008-03-17
ch 10,
abuseGreat Story!!
er..miss angel maybe??
2008-02-08
ch 11, anon.
abusehey hey!
just finished reading yr story, LOVE it!i was looking up anime stories for a load of work (dont ask)anyway it was so ttly cute!just wanted to ask why did you not include the fact that police would be looking for a missing girl and that she would have been seen by SOMEONE?? yeah if thats a bit harsh its all part of this weird project (anime)for coursework but i had to do this "critic review" and im getting carried away! sorry i babble ALOT anyway ta-ta *
TaKari Girl 101
2007-12-29
ch 11,
abuseHeyy Princess!
I love it(L)
Love Yo Lot's
Chimo
Sincerelly
TaKari Girl 101
P.S: Look at my page! look under favorites(L)
mel92
2007-11-19
ch 11,
abuseHey great story I love te bit about the light and Kari!
Dai's Angel
2007-08-25
ch 11,
abuseyour welcome i can't leave a story like this it just pulls me in and it won't spit e out so when ever my parents are calling me or the phone rings i can't hear it it's like im in a trance you are obviously a good writer
Kendra
2007-08-18
ch 8, anon.
abuseI can't wait till the next chapter!
revilo
2007-08-07
ch 8,
abuseplz update soon thanks
becuse its good
DNAngelfanatic07
2007-08-03
ch 8,
abuseI feel so bad for Kari, I hope she'll be alright. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Dai's Angel
2007-08-03
ch 8,
abusethat was great i loved it
Dai's Angel
2007-07-30
ch 7,
abusethat wasgood and poor Kari she misses her family and i bet they miss her keep it up:D
Zacharooshuriken
2007-07-28
ch 7,
abuseoh i feel sorry for tai boo hoo
Steph-DaughterOfTheNite
2007-07-27
ch 7,
abuseUpdate Soon!
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