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| Blissfully Disturbed 2008-04-26 ch 4, | abuseWow, they needed a drug to knock her out and calm her down. Reminds me of Anemone in Eureka 7 though she gets a little crazy if she doesn't take them often. |
| Blissfully Disturbed 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseHmm... Nice beginning. Reminds me of something. *Keeps eye on story* |
| dasfds 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW SO SWEET LOLOLOL |
| Taeniaea 2008-03-17 ch 10, | abuseGreat Story!! |
| er..miss angel maybe?? 2008-02-08 ch 11, anon. | abusehey hey! just finished reading yr story, LOVE it!i was looking up anime stories for a load of work (dont ask)anyway it was so ttly cute!just wanted to ask why did you not include the fact that police would be looking for a missing girl and that she would have been seen by SOMEONE?? yeah if thats a bit harsh its all part of this weird project (anime)for coursework but i had to do this "critic review" and im getting carried away! sorry i babble ALOT anyway ta-ta * |
| TaKari Girl 101 2007-12-29 ch 11, | abuseHeyy Princess! I love it(L) Love Yo Lot's Chimo Sincerelly TaKari Girl 101 P.S: Look at my page! look under favorites(L) |
| mel92 2007-11-19 ch 11, | abuseHey great story I love te bit about the light and Kari! |
| Dai's Angel 2007-08-25 ch 11, | abuseyour welcome i can't leave a story like this it just pulls me in and it won't spit e out so when ever my parents are calling me or the phone rings i can't hear it it's like im in a trance you are obviously a good writer |
| Kendra 2007-08-18 ch 8, anon. | abuseI can't wait till the next chapter! |
| revilo 2007-08-07 ch 8, | abuseplz update soon thanks becuse its good |
| DNAngelfanatic07 2007-08-03 ch 8, | abuseI feel so bad for Kari, I hope she'll be alright. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Dai's Angel 2007-08-03 ch 8, | abusethat was great i loved it |
| Dai's Angel 2007-07-30 ch 7, | abusethat wasgood and poor Kari she misses her family and i bet they miss her keep it up:D |
| Zacharooshuriken 2007-07-28 ch 7, | abuseoh i feel sorry for tai boo hoo |
| Steph-DaughterOfTheNite 2007-07-27 ch 7, | abuseUpdate Soon! |