 Mara-DragonMaster 9/7/07 . chapter 1This was a very good story. A great insight to some of Daniel's thought processes during his 'reintegration' after returning from the dead.
Well done! I enjoyed it a lot!
God bless!
Mara-DragonMaster |
 amberfly 8/6/07 . chapter 1 Hello, Rat. Great story, liked the way your wrote your characters, faithful and believable. Well done. Amber |
 Thraesja 7/6/07 . chapter 1This was beautiful. You captured the confusion and frustration Daniel must have felt as his memories returned very nicely, as well as Jack's patient irritation and Daniel's gradual realization. I loved the part where Jack's offer of beer brought the Shades of Grey flash. Getting emotions like that without context must be unsettling in the extreme. Well done. |
 starjems88 6/17/07 . chapter 1nice! |
 17629578269 6/16/07 . chapter 1i like this one. always wondere how it would feel like, coming back from ascencion and not remembering anything. anyways, nicely done! |
 otherhawk 6/15/07 . chapter 1This is really sweet. I love Daniel trying not to overanalyse things - not something that comes easily to him. You've got a really good handle on thier voices. |