Definitely an interesting concept...and intriguingly written, but too short. It would make a good opening chapter to something bigger.

Very nice writing style, and I love your story. However being a picky critic as I am, I must say that in your summary, if it is "yaoi-ish" then why not put "shounen ai" or "fluff"? Because, yaoi can go from severe kissing to hardcore stuff. Believe me...I have a not-too-nice definition of it.

Brilliant story and well written.

I love this pairing and i'd love to read more of them by you.

True, not very yaoish, but still good. Nice work.

You and Blackjack are not alone! I like this pairing too... we must see more of this pairing! Ugh... I'm really tired... I need to go to bed...

heh. i really like this paring, but i've never seen it done without leo being raped. ; it's nice to see a change. good job, ne!

Very nice. I have always liked this pairing. They compliment each other. Your story was nicely done. It evoked some good emotions. I hope to see more like this from you _

FRICKIN' SWEET! I love that pairing! I thought I was the only one! (given as there's only two other fics about them, and I wrote one and commissioned the other)

If you ask me, the mere fact that you suffered from writer's block is, if anything, unevident in this story. It's a very well-crafted piece. I on the other hand, need serious professional help for my writing. I wonder when I get out of my slump. Anyway, an amazing story it is.

Yaay! A Leo fic! I love Gen. Leo...he was the bomb. :) And this is actually a very well-done fic, despite your protestations to the contrary. This goes a good long way into explaining how Leo could know the pain that Terra was going through on that boat scene. And Leo could very well have loved Kefka before the transfusion...who knows? I personally like to think Leo as straight-mainly because I have a perverse liking for him :P-but like I said, we don't know for sure. And the yaoi twist actually works very well in this fic. *applauds* You made me very happy, yes you did. :)