Reviews for One More Chance

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Fuhrer Moogle 2007-12-13 ch 14,	abuseHmm..you know, I support either decision. If you feel it needs revising, then I would go ahead and do so (I'm in the exact situation with my FFX2 story, which I feel could be much better). Either way, I'll definitely keep reading.
Heian Edenwood 2007-12-13 ch 14,	abuseHmm... Yeah... I'm reading this. =) Personally, I think this story is pretty awesome and you made use ofthe idea of a re-write in a VERY refreshing way. ;) I really hope you update soon. =)
Nasuki- formally Orihime Gi... 2007-12-09 ch 14,	abuseI started reading it and I wanna help! ~Makes a little chibi face~ Please? ~Chimes in with Shiva~ Please??
ionothanus 2007-12-09 ch 14,	abuseI think it's certainly worth the effort, especially with the twists you've just thrown in the last two chapters. It's nice to have a chance to forget about it, step back, and reread everything, isn't it? I just wish I had the time to do that with my schoolwork... So yeah. I look forward to whatever you end up doing with it. :-)
JeanneAndHerAlters 2007-12-09 ch 14,	abuse-waves- I kinda forgot about it cause there was no updates. I KNEW I had another si like story for FFVI on my alert list I jut kinda.. didn't remember WHICH one.
Robby Cartwright 2007-12-09 ch 14,	abuseIt could stand some editing in some places. But other then that, I can't falt the story, tho you might want to see if you could impovre some parts of the story. Hope you update soon!
Fuhrer Moogle 2007-10-11 ch 13,	abuseYeah, new chapter! Loved the personality descriptions in this one, and of course the sheer mystery in the beginning.. Question: Eriol = Loire backwards? I just noticed that and was curious if this was a big plot thing or just a name?
Fuhrer Moogle 2007-08-28 ch 12,	abuseWow, really wasn't expecting that twist... Yay!
321letsjam 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abuseJust wanted to say that this story is pretty good so far. It's definitely one I've been hanging for. I also like what you've done with Seifer and Kira. Oh and as a reply to an Anonymous reviewer that said Pandemona is after Ifrit. I'm pretty sure he's not... You can get Diablos as soon as you get the magical lamp. Pandemona doesn't come until after disc 2 or somewhere along those lines. Sorry, had to say something!
ionothanus 2007-07-07 ch 11,	abuseI like the concept - the basis is a bit more than just familiar, but some of the ways you've handled things so far have been refreshingly strange and unique. For instance, Eriol - you've managed to prevent his background (the formerly-a-PS2 thing) from being too far-fetched, and made it fit by leaving it a bit of a mystery. Plus, even if it is a little out there, you've made him an integral part of the story and a really intriguing character. It works. He works. I also like Kira - she's spunky and intelligent, and apparently not afraid to yell. Gotta love her interaction with her GFs. And the entire relationship with Seifer has been quite enjoyable, and once again refreshing - he's almost always made out to be a big jerk and nothing else, and although you've stayed true to his character you've managed to really effectively give him another side. You've made a genuine person out of him instead of just another orifice. However, I think you need to write more of the characters, all of them, and less of the game's story - Chapters 9 and 10 didn't really feel like much more than a recap of what happens in-game, with Kira tacked on. Take the dream - Kira could have done so much more, whether she ended up in the dream or not, and yet she...well...didn't. You came so close to going somewhere with it, and then fell into the same old story that we've all played through. 11 was better, though. I'm really hoping that you're working towards a greater goal, planning to move on soon, and that my impatience is unnecessary. (Especially since if you keep this up, you'll be ahead of where I am in-game, and I don't want to have to ignore this until I play more :-P). Keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Fuhrer Moogle 2007-07-07 ch 11,	abuseAh yes, the train mission. My dad saw the CGI animation of the train mission, and he was like, "THIS is Final Fantasy?" Kind of funny because the last time he saw an FF game was like 11 years ago with FF1 xD.
JeanneAndHerAlters 2007-07-06 ch 11,	abuseYAY YAYAAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAY I LUV THE TRAIN PART! I'm sure you will make me like it even better! I'm uber glad you updated I've been getting bored and I have a headache I've been chasing cats out all night. -.- stupid cats. Anyway YAY KIRA and her I dunno! Keep it up!
Nlkfmn 2007-07-05 ch 4, anon.	abusedon't like self-insertations, but your story is interesting. Sorry but I just have to point out that you get Pandemona (not Diablos) after Ifrit.
Fuhrer Moogle 2007-07-04 ch 10,	abuseTeehee. Laguna/Julia. It's cute but I can't help feeling the slightest bit awkward knowing that their children will eventually be together. I always blew up the base with Rinoa, Selphie, and Irvine, because I like the dialogue when Rinoa and Squall reunite at FH :D.
JeanneAndHerAlters 2007-07-03 ch 10,	abuseSeems like the second time I've read this seen today! Oh well yesterday now... Anyway so glad you updated so soon I luv updates I get psychotic and run around the house yelling about toaster strudles and ninja monkies. I await the next update with eager eagerness! Keep it Up!

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