This story is really thrilling and exciting in most of the parts.
I really love this story even if i am still reading in chapter 9.

wow, that was a great story. it's given me a lot of inspiration for making my videos. I loved this story the whole time, and you masterfully combined the traditional SH4 essence and feel, but added just enough originality to keep me guessing. well, it was great to read your story, and thanks for mentioning me!

Bravo (stands up and claps) this is one of the best if not the best story I have ever read. Sad to see that it is over but whatever you do next I am sure it will be as awesome if not more so than this. Henry in a Konami shirt that was pretty funny. My only regret...Eileen was still alive! Oh well win some lose some. At least Emily lived. Well See you next story.

DUDE don' ever write that sorta thing on a review dude.You ruined it for me,I hope for no one else.

I did not expect that! Thomas is WAY more useful than Joseph, He basically saved Davids life. The Spears did some very good damage...especially when he stabbed the Holy Mother in the spine...good logic. I do wonder how it will end, I can't wait for the final chapter.

Thank GOD it wasn't a cop-out!Good writing buddy.You need to take a break and brainstorm for awhile before you start anything else.
Good job.

Musgrave ,out

yeah! vic-tor-y! nice... one more chapter please? or more?

I'd usually oppose reviewing my own story, but I just posted my reply to 'Lakeside Amusement Park', so I have no other method to relay this message to Walter:

Walter, I apologise for sending your crazy stalker to the afterlife with you, but the story really wouldn't have made sense if Ralph lived . . . I'll mail you David's Pistol and two clips, that should offer some security. If not, I suggest Witness Protection Program. But don't worry, Derecks isn't really too physically strong: one punch should lay him out.

WOW! DAVID BROUGHT DOW A PYRAMID HEAD! AMAZING!

Oh Walter wanted to say something to you

Walter: Oh Ralph I remember him...and now you send him to the after life. You know he is gonna look me up, Jeeze now life is going to be hell for me

Me: Yeah well who cares about you I hope he finds you. Great story is it done...or is there one more chapter left I can't wait to see!

3 Pyramid heads and Ralph...Who, wouldn't like to be him. I think I know how the final fight will end.

'David meet my new pet and the thing that will kill you...Ridley'

'NO!' David yelled in despair

I'm kidding. I can't wait for the ending.

Very ,very good.The story seems to flow ,and it isn't just David just running around smashing all poor souls in sight.The story seems to have evolved into something better.

I kinda care for the charters now,but Emily still seems very quite.She doesn't seem to say much other then the worrying for David.But it is hard to write cross gender some times.

Good work man.

Musgrave ,out

sweet! just a few more loose ends...

Cool! awesome boss fights, I liked those scenes

Dude he gets stabbed in the shoulder with a spear in the 23 chapter(I think) ,and we never hear of it again when he is doing all this stuff.WTF,is he superman??lol.Good writing bud,keep it up.

Musgrave ,out

P.S. Sorry about the instant message chat.

sweet! can't wait for the update!