It's nice!
Poor Edo. I feel so bad for him. :(
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Aw, that's sad, poor Ed! Well done!

Aw! Poor Ed! His mindset was perfect in this, you can just feel the pain! Great one-shot!

Oh. Very good.

"The pale liquid mocked him."
I must admit that I love that sentence.

Keep up the good work ^_^

That was so sad it almost made me cry!!How could you have Ling leave like that!!? I love Ling!! T.T

depressing and ja ling becomes greed was so emo when i found out

are you going to finish? its really good! :3

Wow... how angsty! I know Lin sort of becomes Greed but I haven't read that part yet... so this is kind of scary! *squeaks like fangirl*

This isn't a oneshot, is it?