I was laughing hysterically throughout this entire chapter - the wordplay was excellent! -goes off to read more-

LOL...what a nice way to trick people

My last review, I swear.

The Mother's Day bit made me tear up. That damn Vivio is such a heart-breaker. ;_;

Ahahaha, the SubaTia chapter was excellent! My favorite so far XD

Bwahahahaha. I'm already cracking up at the wii chapter.

xD

It's a long time I didn't comment, but this short one (dunno why '-'") moved me... I like the way Vivio think about what she had to do to survive and how she fought this anguish to deceive her late mothers. She really inspire my respect u_u.
Good job Satashi, once more! ^^/"

I really liked this one, nice to see it on . It has an interesting perspective on life and the adult film industry.

Well, well, buddy...

This was most interesting.
Too bad about Nanoha and Fate. I guess it was only necessary.
But even so, Helluva job!

A tale of loss and of moving on. Never give up hope. Nice work.
Now, I'm still waitin' for that FatexSignum chapter. I'm sure you won't let me down, buddy.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Hmm this an interesting twist to Vivio, I have nothing against it and beside been short show something of Vivio thoughts up to now (as I said brief) but the final line is quite interesting and pretty much reflect her mother teaching.

Anyway good job, I'll be waiting for the next shot chapter

BT

Hm.

I'm going to say 'nice job', though I think the Takamachi luck rubbed off n Vivio! I can't imagine that getting that kind of job with a respectable agency is the kind of thing that happens to just any homeless girl, no matter how much magic they have.

Now to present with you the follow up challenge. What's Vivio's stage name? :p

It seems that you did it again, with vampire Fate I mean.

Oh boy, I guess Fate isn’t ready for what is coming to her life with Nanoha; it will be fun to see her trying her best to take her blood but fail.

I’ll try to find the threat on AnimeSuki. Bye.

Well, well, buddy...let's see here...

The "Vampire Fate" series was pretty cool. I'm not much into vampires, but I'll certainly keep an eye out for it here. And yeah, I saw Mercurian Angel's drawing of Vampire Fate and...DAMN! XD Give'er a "Helluva job!" for me, will ya?

"Mother's Day" was sweet. Very sweet. I loved it.

"Poor Fate" was...just...A-W-3-SOME! Beautiful work, buddy. 'Loved every second of it. A good solo is always appreciated here and then.

And "Tooth" was just hilarious. XD Kinky Nanoha didn't get what she wanted, huh? XD Nice work.

Well, I think that's it. And my challenge still stands: Make me a Fate/Signum! C'mon, ya know you want to! (Wink, wink)
Keep it up. Update ASAP!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Nice, can't wait to read more chapters :) Please update as soon as you can XD!

Okay that was an amusing chapter, thanks for the read (can't wait for more updates :)!

lol this felt like a deleted scene in a movie. thanks for uploading :D