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| Mitsuru Aki 2008-06-23 ch 2, | abusePlease continue!! It's been a while since you updated but I really like the concept. And it's okay if you have no idea what you're doing, it's how you learn new things and becoming a professional BSer can be really interesting! At least tell me what will happen next! |
| jhanna555 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseI can't believe I missed this fic -_-; Been sifting through a lot of fics to find something good and it seems I've found it ^^. Please update soon! PS: I just love Cloudd in your fic XD |
| Yun-Ah 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abuseWAH why'd you stop!??!?!?!?!?! this is so amazing! it's my second time reading it and it still amazes me! but you haven't updated it... TT_TT well either way... i hope you do! i'm really looking forward to the net chapter if it ever comes out~ |
| PlayfulSylph 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuseOMG pretty plz update ASAP! i wuv this story! ^^ |
| zeppelin13 2007-10-10 ch 2, | abusePlease update. =] |
| Hyuuga's Winged Guardian 2007-08-10 ch 2, | abuseI like the general idea of this story. It's fairly interesting. :) I like your Cloud. XD Sexy bastard. I really want to see what happens in this story. I'll keep on eye on it. -HWG |
| AngelDragonQueen343 2007-07-30 ch 2, | abuseHello! The great and wonderful Yuki-chan is making herself known! I love your story so far. It' diffrent and completely original. I like how you did Cloud. I wish my cloud was that way.(Cloud sending glare to Yuki-chan.) Don't take things so personally Cloud! Anyway cocky asshole demanding Cloud practically defines awesomeness. Leon you did pretty good at sticking close to his character. Overall I love this story can't wait till the update! -YUKI-CHAN OUT! P.S.: Did I write all that? |
| BloodRedViolet 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseplease continue this i want to know what will happen between cloud and leon and the main storyline to |
| stevie 2007-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abusethat was pretty cool... i like it... waiting for it to keep going... *waits* luvya Stevie |
| DanteMoon 2007-06-23 ch 2, | abuseI love your brain for comng up with this, I love it so far and hope to read more soon ^_^ |
| VampireChildofDarkness 2007-06-21 ch 2, | abuseI don't think Cloud is outta charater. In the begining of FFVII He was a cocky asshole who got his way. I think you captured thta perfectly. =^.^= And Squally ( Idon't like to call him Leon. i'm too dedicated to FFVI), also perfect. Annoyed with everything and, wishes the world to hell. Just awesome! This story is amazing! I hope I get to read more soon! ~Reii-chan |
| chibi5 2007-06-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseomg this is so cool lol i like Cloud's attitude in the story :3 |
| Nanneh 2007-06-20 ch 2, | abuseI love this Cloud, the cocky bastard! XD Anyway, can't wait till ya update!^^ |
| Subaru 2007-06-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseMore! More! *sparkly eyes* Please!? Oh, and about the fetus/mother-thingie... Will 'he' have long, silver hair...? *keeps fingers crossed* But HOW will that focus on Cloud then?! o__O;; |
| Chibified Youkai 101 2007-06-19 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter was great, too! Well, so far you can't really tell that you don't know a thing about viruses and stuff, so you're all good (I should know, I'm a computer geek by nature). Besides, if you're making something new up, it doesn't neccessarily have to follow what's already there. Well, update soon. Ja ne, ~Adrian-chan |