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| fluffy2001 2007-06-25 ch 1,  | abuseThat would certainly make sense, why he puts up with the abuse. This was so well written! The style is different for you and I liked seeing it. Interesting how you showed what an abusive jerk his father really was and how even back then he had a breaking point. Good job on this one. |
| ClashChick 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good. Yay, Chase, for standing up to Rowan! Rowan was such an ass in this story, but it made a good story. Good job, I'm adding this to my favorites list:) |
| Running to Stand Still 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuse"an example of why abortion was invented" Now THAT is ... mean ! But otherwise, this was pretty good. Poor Robert Chase ... got stuck with a lousy father AND mother ! Later ! ->Running. |
| Green Penguin 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abusedamn... sorry, don't know how to describe it more than that, but whoa, what a situation. that was good, and heartbreaking for chase, and a backwards sort of way for rowan to go away--but plausible. very interesting and unusual. keep up writing, you're good |
| mikesh 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseI always did feel sorry for Chase b/c of having a family like that. Good work |
| Lerrinus 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOMG This is good! Robert finally stands up to him and he's gone just like that. Poor Robert Chase - no wonder he puts up with House. Rowan made me mad when he hit Robert for coming home with an A due to extra credit. Gr! I'm glad Robert stood up to him but will he ever stand up to House? Great work! :-) |
| Merlin71 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseSo very sad, and so very well done. I hadn't expected where this was going but it makes so much sense. You did great. |
| Ophium 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuse"So today he listens to House berate him, call him an idiot, and act like a condescending asshole for one reason." And he doesn't talk back, Because the day he does, House sends him away- that's brillant! Very cool story and I do love that line at the beginning: "Everybody assumed Chase hated his dad because he was never there. They all assumed wrong. He hated his dad because he was there and then he left." Perfect. |
| Nessa Meneldur 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseWhoo! Good job, sweetie! I love how you use 'comply' in all its various forms throughout the story. It's not only poetic and so expressive, but it's so true! Who -hasn't- complied reluctantly, or complied only after cursing? That's just how it goes, and I love that you used it. I also love your take on why Chase hates his Dad - it has so much more depth to it than most of the fan-based explanations in any fandom. In fact, that's what I love about all of your work. The thought and depth that you put into every story. That is all. Love you! |