 Adorelo 2008-02-01 . chapter 1Oh, again, you're continuing right?
Rule numero uno should be to read this fic my friend, it rocks.
One thing, change your summary. Spelling errors will put people off reading (normally would me, but I've loved your work so far, and this is no exception).
I LOVE Garcia! She is so damn cool. :) and Morgan, well, he's hot :).
Emily's cool, well established, but you could have given her a little more substance (if this was a one shot). If, however, you plan to continue ignore what I've just said (and carry on with her next chapter). :P
Can't wait to see if you take this any further. |