You have a unique take on the lives of Sam and Dean, especially the additional characters you use, such as Caleb. I slightly remember him getting his throat slit in the first season, but I also seem to recall that he appeared to be important to the Winchesters. Cool idea, using him.

This was a story that amazingly didn't have any parts that dragged. It's unusual, but I was completely engrossed in every chapter of this story. Your descriptions, dialog, and characters are vivid and interesting, and the plot was perfect considering the childhood of the Winchester boys. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your work.

aw hugs=cute!

i look like caleb.but a girl version.lol



i love long black hair on men...yummy!


o the angsty-ness!

ah! i love when sammy is my age! then i can relate!

okay not really...

hehe i love it!

oh but his eyes are actually very dark blue. with brown in the middle.

sorry, i just had to say that cuz everyone says my eyes are brown when they are actually dark green with brown in the middle. hazel.

okay, now im off topic!

gotta go read the rest! :)

love this story, you are stealing my attention away from scool, bad story!

Another great piece of work from Ridley. I always love your Brotherhood stories. By the way - "Get well gifts from all my female admirers." was a great line from Dean. Woohoo Panties!

Hi! I LOVE this story. I must have read it a thousand times. When I'm feeling low I like to go to the laptop and bring this story up. Great job!

Aww! Awesome end! Amazing job! :) Thank you for posting this story, I have enjoyed reading it a lot!

:)

Anna
MBCT

Rid,

I wanted to wait until you were done with the re-write before commenting. I read the original when you wrote it last year, and I really like the changes you and Tidia have made. Are you planning to give any of your other stories a Brotherhood spin?

That was adorable, I loved it. Great job with the story!

Great ending! Sam saying the 'f' word... Surely not...!

I really enjoyed reading the 'revamped' version of this story. I loved it the first time around, but it was even better this time! Thanks for going to all the trouble!

I totally loved this chapter! After all they'd been through, to be able to laugh again was great! This whole story was great and I've enjoyed every minute of it.

Thanks for a wonderful ride!

AW! I ADORED that ending! *tackles*

Great chap, brilliant interactions between the characters, especially the brotherly one between Sam and Dean.

great job with re-editing the story! i really enjoyed reading this the second time around...and it fits really well withing the brotherhood AU now that you've tweaked it. again, great job...i can't wait for more Paper Tiger!