Great story. A very interesting and insightful perspective on this portion of the manga. Thanks for writing.

this is AWESOME! i would also like to know if you know of a website that i can read the manga on, that would be very helpful. thank you in advanced.

Really enjoyed your take on the aftermath of Reload 7. Your characterization was spot-on. Your Gojyo-Hakkai dynamic read like it could have been canon. Wonderful!

This is equal parts moving and disturbing; but, most importantly, it's all parts Hakkai. I really appreciate your consistent understanding of Hakkai's psyche and how that very valid interpretation invests your stories.

My favorite part of this is how you described Hakkai's soul returning to his body, so vivid I could almost feel it myself. A really fine story, with a lot to think about in it.

Wow, I really liked how this was written. You definitely got Hakkai's voice down and I liked his point of view about the fight. Of course, the analytical thinking about his odds -- nice.

I appreciated Gato's presence in that scene, I think it really helped. I don't think I've seen many stories that feature him or Hazel at all.

"That sounded like something he'd say." Not sure why, but that just made me laugh. Such a Hakkai-thought.

Good job!

A wonderful perspective on the outcome of the battle, exploring both the complex themes of death, souls and resurrection, as well as the bond between Hakkai and Gojyo.

Interesting, well-written, and a good, thought-provoking read!

Hiya V'

This is such a (to steal previous reviewers words) unique story. A wonderful little lovely piece. Well written and well thought out. I love the layers of the things unsaid through the words that they did speak. It is very much who they are...I love it.

Lovely, lovely piece

luv n hugs

hm. interesting perception of what happened when hakkai was struck by lightning. very imaginative story. great work! and very unique story line!

kitematsu XD