aw thats all i can say that was so cute

AW!! Yay for Nash and Mia fluffiness! ^-^ What a sweet story!!

Anon E. Mous: Just out of curiosity, what do you mean by "wondering where beast people came from"? How does that fit in with the story?

You know, I always wondered where beast people came from.

awwwww...cute and funny!

That was very sweet ^_^ I find it rather ironic how Kyle and Nash could get to talking like this, but I like the change.

Ehh...i SHOLD be signed in...but...*shrug*.

First off, I love the phantasy star references.

Second off, I gotta say the story reminded me very much of Lunar itself. The classic story you've heard a million times, but done well enough that you're more than happy to hear a retelling.

Good work, keep up

I love it!

Nicely paced and well written. I could actually see the characters saying these things (a disturbing rarity)and that just made it all the better. Great story. 10/10

*sqeal* Kawaaaiiiii!!! ^___^ I love this one! It's so cute!!! If ya can't tell already, I'm a hopeless romantic ~_^ Write some more stuff like this, it's really good!

Awwwwww...kawaii kawaii kawaii.^^

I liked the dialogue in this one; it seemed to flow naturally and also held the reactions quite well. My only critisism is the use of anachronistic phrases such as 'jock' and 'hooked up.' They distract from the setting just a little too much for me to ignore them. Anyway, good work. I'm looking forward to more from you ^_~