I just finished whats been written and all I have to say is wow, just wow. I know it has been years since you've, but I hope that this motivates you to write more. *puppy dog eyes*

moe please

wow, I'd forgotten about this fic(first stumbled across it at the XZ archive site) and it's still rather good. I even recently stumbled across a chpt set further into this ficafter Xan's come outta his coma), titles "nice Guy" or something like that, so I know there's more. is there any chance you'll come back and finish this? cause I hope ya do, it's a very good fic and I'd love to see it concluded.

I'm so so glad I found this story again. I had lost track of a while ago. Glad its still as amazing as I rememberd. Like how Tara was brought into the mix, like W/T but I also like Oz and of course Xander is the man. Theres so much going on I'm impressed you can keep it all togethere. Hope you update soon. Cant wait for Giles and the others to learn about what been going on back home.

After I found this story I read everything you have here in one sitting and then, within the 24 hours after that I went back and read it again. Amazing stuff you have here. The characterizations are so vivid, the reactions and dialogue so realistic that I feel like I'm actually there, a part of the action and angst. You are an incredible writer.

Now you just have to finish it. What can I do to help? I'm begging here;-).

This a great story, which i have enjoyed reading and i can't wait for the next chapter to be up.

Another brilliantly written chapter, Alan. I particularly loved the confrontation between Willow and St Clair and the meeting between Angel and Buffy. This story gets better all the time and I look forward to the next part.

Alan - may I reiterate that *this* is much more true to the show and the characters than the current season? I either somehow missed the last chapter elsewhere, or you've only posted it here, but either way, I'm glad I found it. I eagerly await more. Loved the Willow/Tara Moment, BTW. Great work.

WOW! way to go! love the story so far!

Bill

Brilliant, nice twist to the season finale...keep it coming

What right does Andrew to say that Buffy can't have a normal life

what I mean she had a normal life and saved the world 6 or 7 times.

This guy just really burns up thinking that he can control buffy she is way too

stuborn Giles tried and Welsey too, but no success so this dude

thinks he can. Well thats my peace.

This is great. I want Xander to wake up soon though... anyway I love all the interactions, with the parents and the ones who have been like parents and everything. Very dramatic and involving. Your attention to detail weaves a captivating story.

An absolutly wonderful and powerful fic you've written, Alan. I am quite impressed at how well you've been able to get inside the characters heads, especally Xander. The scene in chapter one where he's expressing his internal feelings, as well as where he confronts his mother about his father's abuse was overwhelming. Hopefully Joss or another writer on the actual show will read this fic and see the potential Xander Harris has as a character.

this is a great fic. and as an xander fan he needs his thing you know the one thing hes good at.

I'm really likeing where this is going. A very interesting alternate version of events. I am getting ansty waiting for the next part so please hurry!