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Famous4it 9/21/09 . chapter 1
Me like this a lot.
Loserfish 12/30/08 . chapter 1
I liked it. I really, really liked it.

I find it amusing how you made Larxene afraid of the dark but you kept everyone in character and so everything flower well. And now, you've made me consider possibly shipping them as a couple. Haha.

Good job and keep it up. :D
Tami 5/14/08 . chapter 1
Luurve the manga reference! YAY! I would love to be Larxene then... *drools*
SilverKitsune013 4/26/08 . chapter 1
Manga reference for the win! Great job!
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A 12/31/07 . chapter 1
Cool. I liked that. And, I'll say it's safe to assume I'm the first reviewer of '08. Happy New Year!
xoxTheAngelFromMyNightmarexox 8/4/07 . chapter 1
Great story! I'm new to KH fanfiction, but I think your story's awesome.
Someone2003 6/17/07 . chapter 1
I like how you used the setting to make a story. And you're right! I've seen the PS2 version of the basement scenes in Chain of Memories. It's dark down there!

It's a good, short fic. Very nice!

Ciao For Now Everyone!
i AM the Random Idiot 6/17/07 . chapter 1
“Perhaps you’ve forgotten,” He spoke, obviously irritated while he tried to rub the drowsiness out of his eyes with a palm; “That this month’s goal is to give proper greetings.”

HAH! MANGA REFERENCE! I love that.
Constance Greene 6/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow. Jessica is Larxene in disguise. ;D

LMAO I'm KIDDING. What would you do if I said you were, though?

..that's a scary thought.

But seriously. You write as her so well. D: A mixture of what I'd think her to be. Normally I can only portray one side of her personality in a story - you did both. She's both gruff and then... you know. Annoying and on crack.

Aww Zexy sleeping.

Omg. When she kicked him. XD I hope you don't mind if I sorta steal that idea for the next chapter of Spell Check. -not sure if she showed you the outline or not.- That'll be Axel and Demyx's rude awakening... along with Xaldin. o_o;

Ha! The 'give proper greetings' crap always reminds me of the CoM manga. xD Love it.

“Hello, Zexion, how are you today? Did you know that your light is on crack?”

YES. Favourite line in this entire thing. Loveitloveitloveit.

AND THEN WHEN SHE WALKS INTO HIM. And he's all. Seductive. "Hello." ;D YUM.

..wtf. -forgot that she trips.- xD Loser.

The end's note. Teehee. But what was her point of going down there all along? o-O I... don't think I ever caught that. -curious.-

And I think every story you've written is on my favourite stories list. Oh well.

Constance.
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