The second chapter was hot...=) (And sounds a lot like Roy Mustang from Fullmetal Alchemist) Anyway, it's awesome in general... Keep on writing!

i like these

OMG, jealous!Heiji is such an epic-win. Haha XD I love how he's just like, I'M HERE, SO I'M GOING TO CRASH ON YOUR COUCH. DEAL. I wish I had a guy I could be THAT comfortable with XD OH, FICTION. YOU RUIN REAL LIFE FOR ME

Ooh, I like HeijixKazuha and since there's food involved Heiji, the walking bottomless pit, may be prodded into doing some interesting things. (but it seems the food stuff hasn't been a huge factor in the story except for chapter 2.) So , with all puns intended, please continue to write more delicious stories!

~K~(@)

too lazy to log in love ,#

absolutely loved it X3 Heiji's logic with the too late/early bit made me smile XD (and for a while I was like... what bit did she steal from Coupling?) Definitely adore how you made the scene your own :D ,#

I READ IT! And love it. And would very much appreciate more updates :P <3 ^_^

P.S: Jealous!Heiji is always epic WIN :D

interesting, wonder what you'll think of next.

cute

yeah, higher rating, the higher the better! don't need to worry about it XP
Great chapter! can't wait for the other 23 delicious food!

Oh... my... GOD! You're sick, you know that?! In a good, harmless, and delightfully humourous sense, anyway. Bubblegum, peanut oil, electricity and 9-inch corkscrews?! 0-0; Just WTF did he do with them? On second thought, don't tell me; I don't want to get traumatized, too, thank you very much!

(You know, you could have emphasized the "effects" Kazuha's water-soaked white shirt had on Heiji, especially from his POV. Just wanted to point that out.)

that was cute

This was cute. Poor Kazuha! Shinichi and Heiji really need to be careful in their arguments. Otherwise, THEY won't be to blame for each other's injuries or anything. Kazuha can get dangerous too! *tsk tsk* Silly boys.

I liked this. You've gotten much better at writing this pairing, and I've seen a lot of improvement, so keep it up!

This was interesting. Can't wait for the next one. ^^

yeah, there'll be another fanfic challenges on Heiji and Kazuha!
hope there'll be more romance in future chapter, and for the ratings, of course the higher the better! =P