*grins* This is amazing! Glad I stumbled across it - keep it up!

I was mistaken. I looked it up and the majority of the team is male but Delma and Ciona.

Great story, just one thing. Faerieland's team isn't all female...its actually all male, lol. Other than that, its solid.

Hey, me again. OH! You're doing a Meridell War fic? I'd love to read that someday. Hm...title eh? How about something like "Tides of War" or "Behind the Front Lines".I'm no good with titles either...

This is really good! I hope you update soon. The idea of making the Maraquan chapters their own story is great.

Aww, cute chapter. =D

Keep writing, or I'll sic Chuck Quizmo on you.

Like usual. XD

Ciao!

~Kit Quizmo

This is Kitayl, I had a name change. :D

I LOVED this chapter. I love the whole concept of it. What can I say? I like reading this angsty stuff. :3

Anywyas, keep writing, otherwise I'll sic Chuck Quizmo on you. X3

Ciao!

~Kit Quizmo

Hey! Love this chapter, even though it's very dark and angsty. And I agree with you, you should write more about the players not the commentators.

I liked this chapter a lot, it had a little bit of everything. Now, I'd normally threaten you with Dialga, but he fell down. Off a cliff. :D So, till then...

Sayonara!

~Kit-Chan

It has been said even a terrible team has a chance at winning the Altador Cup if they had a good goalie. Keep in mind, it has also been said that Neopia is flat, NeoCoke tastes better than NeoPepsi, and Eragon was a good movie.

But the thing about the goalie was true.

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LMAO. X3 Anyways, this chapter was one of the best yet, so keep writing or I'll sic Dialga on you. -twitch-

First, this chapter was pretty funny. I also liked the fact that you used the AC Committee this time. :3

I like the title, but in a way, it doesn't maske sense. It doesn't really revolve around one person...but in some twisted unexplainable way, it does. O.o

Ki:...You make no sense.

Kitayl: Shut up. -.-

I love how you really get into the characters, because you sort of bring out their personalities. Oh yeah, and I'm looking forward to a Roo Island match in the future. Yay. X3

Until then, keep writing!

Ciao ciao! :3

I really liked that last chapter. Don't know why you disliked it, the ending was funny. So you're supporting Lost Desert too?

“That Yooyu sure was a blast!” ZOMG THAT WAS GOOD. X3 I'm excited for the Yooyuball action, so please keep writing. :3

This story pwns so far, keep writing! :D