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| bigandcarrie 2007-07-27 ch 6,  | abuseYou rock! This was one hell of a story. and yeah J/G belong together! |
| Murgy31 2007-07-18 ch 6, | abuseawesome story! Brilliant! |
| coldbrowneyes 2007-07-12 ch 6, | abuseI love this story!! I am a big fan of g/j. I even have a c2 archieve dedicatied to the couple. I have put your story on it. I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
| Charlie Winchester 2007-07-10 ch 6, | abuseHey, I'm back! And that was really sweet. Good job. -Charlie |
| Charlie Winchester 2007-06-19 ch 2, | abuseThat was a great second chapter, though kind of short. It felt a little like a filler chapter to me, but that's just IMO. Other than that, fantastic. To be honest, Amanda's bugging me (LOL) but that's just b/c Jordan's supposed to be there. Hehe. But I won't judge yet haha. Stupid, stupid Garret. Are you freaking walking OUT OF THERE? And in response to your PM... A Beta is pretty much someone that double-checks your work, looks for improvement, etc. That make sense? A fighting fish... LOL. I want one of those. |
| Rapunzelcat 2007-06-19 ch 2, | abuseNo Garret, don't do it!! If that's where it's heading, I wish you wouldn't!! |
| craz4wj 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abusei myself am not a G/J fan. so i am not sure i like where this is going. but it seems interesting |
| Charlie Winchester 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh! Awesome! I like how you've started this. The very last line is a great way to leave us after the first chapter/prologue/whatever else people call it lol. I hate Woody. Sorry, that was a little random... but I do. With all my very frigging guts... lol. Kay, done now. Um, my suggestions would be to double-check your grammar and spelling. It's not SUPER noticeable, but I'm really picky about that, so yeah. Just a couple spelling errors here and there, and some punctuation issues. But I don't need to go into that unless you ask me. And IMO, you can never have too much description. Well, maybe you can lol but I like how you have a good amount. Me? I say add even more. Describe the hospital room: senses- what it looks like, scents, tastes, what does he really feel like after finally waking up? Anyway, I'm done rambling on. Just to be sure, this IS gonna be Garret/Jordan right? I really really really hope so... otherwise you might make me cry... a lot... more than I already have after seeing that stupid finale... LOL. I hope you post the next chapter soon! -Charlie P_S: Oh, I almost forgot. Do you need/want/are interested in a Beta at all? |
| Rapunzelcat 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so sad! I'm not a G/J shipper so I suspect I won't like where this is heading, but it's good, so I'll tune in anyway. Please update soon! |