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| yellow power 2007-07-14 ch 6,  | abuseHi! Thanks for adding the Z/Bridge and Syd/Sky stuff, I loved it! It was really cool that the girls always turned out victorious in the matches. i hope you update soon |
| GinaStar 2007-07-09 ch 6, | abuseI'm certainly enjoying it! Excellent story!! |
| general-joseph-dickson 2007-07-09 ch 6, | abuse50 reviews huh? Well I have over 80 in twenty chapters for Reflections and I think this is a better story overall. You should have 50. |
| yellow power 2007-07-07 ch 5, | abuseInteresting so far. When will you add some Sky/Syd, Bridge/Z romance? Update soon |
| GinaStar 2007-06-24 ch 5, | abuseI loved it!! A touch of humanity there at the end made it that much more "real" |
| general-joseph-dickson 2007-06-24 ch 5, | abuseOkay, that was cool. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2007-06-20 ch 4, | abuseI enjoyed it. Nice job. I actually wish it was longer. |
| GinaStar 2007-06-19 ch 4, | abuseVery good!! Hope you *don't* let Bridge read her..at least, not for a while! |
| general-joseph-dickson 2007-06-19 ch 3, | abuseThis is awsome. I like Charlie a lot. |
| Tierra 2007-06-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow, I didn't even think of Charlie. I've seen the whole of SPD at least twice, frim Beginnings, Pt. 1 to Endings, Pt. 2, & I'm not sure I remember Charlie kicking Cruger's butt as you described, so naturally, I thought it was Icthyor from the episode Badge, 'cause he kicked Cruger's butt in sparring, trying to fight over Isinia, & where everyone but Jack & Z ended up in the infirmary. Oh, well. As for how much else I want the rangers to go through, I believe Silverback had them running through the desert & forest, climbing trees, fighting a simulation of Krybots & a giant scorpion monster, & pretty much everything you described, except for the weapons. The quicksand part kinda reminds me of when the rangers-except Jack-did the obstacle course in Confronted, & they came back all muddy. And after seeing SWAT 1 & 2, no, I wouldn't want to be in their shoes. Keep up the good work! |
| L123o123v123e123 2007-06-18 ch 2, | abuseIs it Tommy Oliver's daughter? |
| Faded Feathers 2007-06-18 ch 2, | abuseCharlie the old A squad S.P.D ranger? caz of the Lie on the end of char-lie's name? |
| Tierra 2007-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy guess? Icthyor. Hmm...I say work them as hard as Seargent Silverback did in SWAT 1 & 2. |
| lilypad456 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abusekewl start! update soon |
| Faded Feathers 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseJack? I'm not sure this is hard but the story is interesting... |