This was indeed a joy to read, you did a great job capturing the essence of both characters (though I daresay Iago would have done a lot more talking to himself, and probably would have stacked the patrons in favor of him before issuing the challenge, but that would have ruined the story.) Great job!

You Rock Tsona!

I think your theology is a little off,but then this is FanFiction. Though a FanFiction of the Bible is deeply disturbing on many levels, but if your FanFictioning Milton I guess that's all right. I'm afraid I must agree with the Satan character that he has caused more to fall than Iago. It would be interesting to see how Iago holds up after his clothes begin to deteriorate, that would be slightly amusing. Nice dialog I like the tone.