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| Hermes 2007-11-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseA great tale Good Work |
| IT-IS-I.OR-IS-IT. 2007-10-07 ch 8,  | abuseaww that so sweet |
| kempokarate12 2007-07-08 ch 8, | abuseThat was very good! I must say. It was sad too. I'm glad Brooklyn crossed over peacefuly, and that Teddy was open to Melinda and her "gift". Good job on this story, and I hope you continue!! |
| kempokarate12 2007-07-06 ch 2, | abusehey you really need to update! i realy wanna know where your story is going to go! i really need to knwo. so please update! please and thank you! |
| kempokarate12 2007-06-22 ch 7, | abuseGood. A little sad but still really good. I can't wait to find out what Brooklyn has to say to Teddy. By the way, I love the names you thought of |
| Pink Blackberry Girl 2007-06-21 ch 7, | abuseI really liked that chapter, it was really good! |
| Nita_kit 2007-06-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseWonderful plot! very interesting. keep it up! |
| Pink Blackberry Girl 2007-06-18 ch 6, | abuseIt's really good, I can't wait for chapter 7! |
| kempokarate12 2007-06-18 ch 6, | abuseI KNEW IT I KNEW IT! Great chapter and I like your last line. It's very... what's the word?? ... cliff hangy? I don't know. Anyway, very good and I can't wait for chapter 7! |
| kempokarate12 2007-06-18 ch 5, | abuseAmazing I really wanna know who the dark haired woman is, and is Brooklyn his daughter?? Ahh I must go on! |
| kempokarate12 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry I didn't mean to upset you. I really do think your story is amazing, and I know that it's very difficult to write one out, and I think you're doing a great job at trying to make it like the show. Because I can actually picture the thigns you are saying in my head. So don't get me wrong I love your story, and I think you should go all the way with this. And I'm very much looking forward to what awaits Melinda in the next chapters! Keep up the great work! |
| kempokarate12 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abuseIt's pretty good. Only the thing is you go so fast! There's nothing wrong with that, in fact it might just be me readng it really fast. But I feel like you're going from one thing to another like that *snaps fingers* But don't get me wrong your story is great, I really do like it. So keep going and I can't wait for Chapter 5!! |
| kempokarate12 2007-06-17 ch 3, | abusewhat did melinda read?? i have to know! i think there's another chapter after this so i'm gonna read it. but great job! and i dont' midn that the chapters are so short. i like that |
| CharmedNeptune47 2007-06-16 ch 3, | abuseloved it really want to know what melinda read!! please keep going please!! |