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| aaattttackkkkk 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, i thought he was much older than he was. |
| Pridefall 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet, and eloquent. I liked it. Only problem I have is this: "Yet as much of a thrill as his artistry gave him, it had never once brought a smile to his" You mean Him, right? or his face? Either way works. Overall: 8/10 |
| moonmagicks 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and positively gorgeous. |
| n00b-masta2112 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. It was psycotically (sp) beautiful. Loved it. |
| Bella Shia 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this! It's really good. And really creepy. It's got an eerieness I think fits Sasori well. I loved your description and the whole idea. Even if it is kinda gross. Awesome work! Keep it up! |