Reviews for A Pen or a Sword?

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Barky 2008-08-24 ch 2, anon.	abuse...o.o I have decided that everyone who is from the south with the middle name lynn is evil...My sister and my friend's sister...And now Cindy Lynn. xD You should have named her Amanda. Way more evil, lol.
lost cause331 2008-05-22 ch 42,	abuseSorry it took so long to finaly catch up. My life got really busy and I'm a slow, leisure reader. You have amazing OCs. They have consistent qualities and flaws that don't magically change one day without a reason. Ed and Jaxith are together... wow. I can just see Izumi showing up, finding out, and going all over-protective of her student and giving Jaxith the third-degree. Poor Jaxith. This was great and I can't wait for the next chapter so I can keep up chapter by chapter. I'm going to be reading your other fanfic now.
Tears of Eternal Darkness 2008-04-24 ch 42,	abuse... Euclid can be scary sometimes... keep going, this getting really interesting! =^-^=
ehxhfdl14 2008-04-23 ch 42,	abuseAh, I love Euclid. He can be just so blunt at times, and that is something I appreciate. Did I mention my adoration for the part where Jaxith hisses, "I hate you all!" while learning the code? laugh Well, I do, I do.
Phantom SunsSong 2008-04-21 ch 42,	abuseWow, only three people got it? I feel special. x3 -pales at the term 'sexual favors'- Er, should Jaxith be worried there? I'm a little confused, though. When did Jaxith call Euclid a half-baked quack? Was it in a drawing or before Euclid's chalk snapped? That aside, another good chapter. ^^
Katty008 2008-04-20 ch 42,	abuseI love Euclid. And the "What did Jaxith do today?" But particularly Euclid.
Phantom SunsSong 2008-04-12 ch 41,	abuseRing theory? What about string theory? Eh heh... I have no idea what the ring theory is. ^^; They've noticed something is going on, and they're sending in Jaxith. Hm... Yes, it does sound like things are getting good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the great work! And I'm glad you fleshed out the story some more. I always hate (and love) it when a good story ends.
pandafoot105 2008-04-12 ch 41,	abuseWow, he really did get interrogated... nice chapter, it made me laugh and it had it's own serious bits to it, such as the whole Hughes thing. Well-rounded -nods in appreciation-
pandafoot105 2008-04-12 ch 40,	abuseSorry for being so far behind on the chapters - I've been on vacation all week! Camping and visiting ect. But now I get to read two in a row :)
Tears of Eternal Darkness 2008-04-12 ch 41,	abuseo... interesting. update soon, k? =^-^=
Triops Master 2008-04-11 ch 41,	abuseHmm... and so the plot thickens... very interesting.
Tears of Eternal Darkness 2008-04-05 ch 40,	abusethat was cool. poor Jaxith though, hope he doesn't get in too much trouble. keep going! =^-^=
EdElricRules 2008-04-04 ch 40,	abuseOkay I think your the insert that danced with Alphonse ^^; Awesome chapter... “We need to talk about last night.” Roy announced, slipping his coffee. “About your lack of driving skills?” Jaxith smirked, trying to get a rise out of his great-uncle. XD XD XD Go Jax...Oh I notice a spelling mistake point point "Roy announced, slipping his coffee." it should be sipping ^^ I feel proud that I could actually see one XD Sorry if I made you feel annoyed with my proudness ^^; Chibi-Sheska
Phantom SunsSong 2008-04-04 ch 40,	abuseGood chapter! Poor Jaxith, it's not his fault... Ha, are we leading up to the Halloween One-Shot now? -grins- That one was funny... As for who you were, I'm going to take a shot in the dark and say you were the blonde girl with the dark haired girl that danced with Al. The one working on the paper and heard Jaxith say he was going out with a guy. I was leaning towards one of them, and ultimately chose the blonde one because of all the schoolwork you've been having to do lately. I wondered if it might be some kind of tie in with that, since she had to do it at the dance rather than actually dancing. Also, you said that you made an appearance somewhere in chapters 36-58... Did you mean 38? Anywho, I look forward to seeing more! I think I always say that in my reviews...
Frathworth and Butts 2008-04-04 ch 25,	abuseWe have gathered here, infront of this laptop, to honour the author who, with impeccable imagination, have created this wonderful story. It is with great enthusiasm we say "OMFG, I LOVE THIS STORY!" Haha, do you believe me when I say that this is the greatest story I've read about the Elric Bros? What would make my day was if this piece of heaven came out in paper-back, I asure you, I WILL be the first one in line to buy it! And now, on to some commentary! (Yay! ^_^) Your Characters; Lucas von Kisper. This guy makes me very happy, he reminds me alot of my grandfather, bless his soul, his being all strict and a very honouralble person, kudos to you for making him! Jaxith Howard Skibbereen. First, I love his name, second, gush, he's such an adorable little boy, I want to hug him and pinch his cheek and be like an all-annoying aunt. With weird quirks...(lauhgs) Gerodi Robert Mustang. There is only one thing you can say to this character and that is 'RESPECT', it's practically all over him. I wouldn't want to upset that man. I really liked the way he handled Archer in this chapter (25) for some reason, I got really proud all of a sudden. Huh, maybe I'm just weird like that.. XD An other thing, You have done a great job with your OC's, They fit in very well and and picturing Mustang with a big, nosey and total nut-case family brings a bi-i-ig smile on my face. I really enjoy reading your story and I'm going to continue doing such, and be very happy! :D Have a great day! :P P.S Heh, I'm putting you on alerts and favorites, this is to good of an oppertunity (that doesn't look right.. -_-;) to not do it. Enjoy Life!

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