I simply loved this. I do hope you write more for this couple.

aww this is very cute! Vaan is so over-ptotective and overreacts a bit but it's cute how he thinks of her a lot =) and the ending was very funny lol

Adorable. I really enjoyed reading it, your a great writer. I loved the ending, Penelo's innocent question was cute.

This was really cute. I like your writing style and i hope you write more.

Very cute, and you've written Penelo perfectly. :-)

aw, how cute! your dialogue is fantastic! i love how everyone chimed in, warning balthier not hurt penelo. you keep everyone so wonderfully in character. i'm glad another balpen writer is here. you are a great contribution to this little community.

I thought it was very cute and well written! *hands over a gold star* Floozy... I don't know why but everytime I hear that word it makes me giggle. I love Balthier and Penelo and this was a great tribute!

Keep it up!

Ecrudgirl