Oh.My.Gosh. I'm re-reading this story, and I LOVE IT! Elizabeth and Will were completely in character. I especially enjoyed the first three chapters with Elizabeth and her nightmares. If you have ever seen Harry Potter puppet pals, then the appropriate reaction for those three chapters is "Angst, angst, angst!" LOL, sorry if you haven't seen that, just wanted to throw it in there. Keep writing!

Creative chapter titles, I must say. =)

This story had an intriguing beginning (chapters 1 - 3), but I lost interest quickly once it became a re-write of movie events. Your writing itself is very good; your plot line seemed a bit lost.

Keep writing!

-Aina

I read this before and I really liked your take on Elizabeth's feelings during that whole period. Very well done.

a little too bunched together

Wow, that was excellent! You really made everything between DMC and AWE flow beautifully. And you wrote Elizabeth and Will very well.

Fantastic job!
:)

the last paragraph was IT! nice and original story, well done!

There is something about an author's ability to go full circle at the end of a story that gives me chills.

An epilogue, though it would be nice, is really not necessary. The ending was "bril" haha.

I really did enjoy this D, every last bit of it.

I missed this.

Angst has never felt so good!

Wow...that's really all I can say. That was probably the best story I've read in awhile. No lie. You're a really good author and the way that you incorporated the movie but got inside Elizabeth's head, I honestly wanted to cry when I was finished reading it. Thanks for writing something so well!

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT xx

*Sobs* That last paragraph was so perfect! You really captured how heartbreaking Will and Elizabeth's separation would be. Just great stuff, matey!

So glad things are right between them again! I can't wait for the next chapter and the WEDDING!

Great final chapters darling. Rock on :)

This is a really really really great story. I love how the last line brings everything in a full circle. Great last paragraph. I love your stuff!

i think you should write an epilogue to this. other than that, i LOVED it. you right into her head and i love that. anyways, hope to read more of your stuff! `=D