I got to this story on whitehound's recommendation, and I'm very glad I did. It's excellent. I really enjoyed your characterisation of Severus and your take on his home life.

Well written and horribly probable, but I have to say that I've never heard anybody in Britain use the expression "breed", which so far as I know is exclusively American. If they thought he was foreign-looking they would call him a "wog" or possibly a "paki".