Good fic, damn good. Don't mind if I send it along to some of my dnd buddies.

I really liked this fic, good job.

ooh. Lovely! Nicely done, this bit.
I haven't ever played in Eberron... usually Faerun.

Absolutely brilliant story. A most worthy read.

NO!

Alright, so I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Yeah, I see it had to happen. I'm gonna go read the next one now.

Just one little typo - you put something about needing to watch out for 'Sever' and his bunch where you really mean 'Savage'. That did kind of confuse me for a bit!

Nice, though (I mean, not nice, but...)
t-d

Nice chapters. I'm looking forward to reading book two.

Nice chapter. I can't waiti to read the next one.

Nice chapters. I'll be looking forward to the next one.

Another great couple of chapters.

That's cool! I love those guys! I'm always really interested in ideas about choices, and free will and freedom, and it's an absolute joy to see it done as well as this. I wasn't familiar with the Eberron world, but I can still understand everything that's going on, which is another point in your favour.

Thank you, and please keep writing!
t-d

ps - the wolf. The rock clearly had a gemstone inside, probably an amethyst. But if you mean do I understand WHY you put that in, then no. I have no idea.

Nice chapter. Sorry it took so long for me to review but I am currently on vacation and my acess to the internet is limited. As for your PM, no nothing screwy has been happening to my stories section on my account. i'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Another great chapter. Keep them coming.

Nice chapter. I'll be waiting to see the next one soon.

Nice chapter. I have no clue what the significance of the wolf being purple is. That cloak and hat sound like the garb of a red mage from Final Fantasy. I hope to see the next chapter soon. See ya.

Great chapter, can't wait for more. The way you described the wolf, possibly a familiar? Anyways, great story going.