oh god... luv it... its weird but... i just luv it...

LOL!
This is hilarious! And clever! >XD

HAHAHAHAHA! I have a sick mind-I was imagining what Jim was probely imagining. XD

XD Brilliant. ^_^

LoL this story is greast, hope you do others like this, LoL a halo one about the great Journy would be great.

LMAO! Poor Jim. Quite amusing.

HAHAHA! that was great! *wipes tears out of the coners of my eyes (from laughing so hard ;D)*

SO FUNNY!!

Ahahaha, we're reading this in English right now.
This was realy good.

Haha. Very nice. Love the story.

BAHA! poor li'l jim :) great work!

omg...perfect!!