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| nikki.02 2007-10-03 ch 1,  | abuseSuch a great way for Danny to propose! Loved it! |
| Dine7184 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was such a lovely story. I just loved it. And I knew that he would have let her drop into the water! lol... loved it. The proposal was just beautiful from the beginning to the end. You did an awesome job on it. :) |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat a perfect way for Danny to propose... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| wjobsessed 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was really good. Love all the horseplay, frolicking, lovemaking. Very DL :) Thanks. |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abusethis was beautiful. teasing at the beggining and so much love at the end :) |
| mel60 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseSigh. I could read fics like that everyday and die happy. I love this one. I love the proposal, I love the playfulness, I love the happy ending. Don't stop writing. |
| TBD 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseOh that was so sweet and perfect. I love Danny being so adventurous and spontaneous and Lindsay going along for the ride. Their interaction in (and out of) the water seemed to fit them perfectly. Great job. |
| LocoGreggo 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseWow..that was great. Hehe. Thank you for that. |
| A.Boleyn 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuse*dies from Squee overload* That was BEAUTIFUL... your best ever, perhaps! There are so many moments that stood out... I love your description of Danny's body in the waves, their footprints in the sand, their hands together, every touch and kiss. Simply gorgeous! I actually read it this morning and didn't have time to review, but it started my day with a huge smile and I had to read it over again. ;) Their interaction was so spot-on: playful and sweet, warm and honest. I have total warm fuzzies right now. Bravo! |
| angel6.d 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThe proposal was beautiful! The whole story was beautiful! Loved it lots! Keep up the great work! -angel6 |
| ReJo 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I smiled through the whole story. Good vibes. He was wrong for getting her to kiss him and then dropping her, tackling her in the sand. At least she got him back. @ “I love you Danny.” The words came out of nowhere. Lindsay blinked at him, as taken as surprise as he. There was a brief silence as his blue eyes bored into her. His hand came up to cup her face. She shivered at his touch. “Then marry me.” Danny was stunned, then elated. His response was the most natural reaction, an instinct almost. [His proposal was so right and so natural at that moment. I would have been shocked if he hadn't proposed. Great moment!] @ As they stood up, Danny realized he had forgotten something. “Lindsay, you know that I love you, right?” “Well you hadn’t said it explicitly, but I thought the proposal kind of meant the same thing.” “Because I do. I want our life together.” [Aw] @ You have written them as a loving couple. Good job! |
| kaylee42 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abusecute story and nice follow up to tension. I enjoy reading your stories, please keep writing! |