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| caz1969 2008-07-20 ch 1,  | abusereally really great! |
| grissom07 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseokay that was awesome i almost started crying... wow... amazing... now if only there was a little bit more... like if they made their own vows what are they... how fun was the reception... maybe honeymoon... keep goin please |
| bbandgsr 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseaww you brought a tear to my eye and made me laugh at the same time!! |
| wobbear 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuse"They were brilliant and meticulous and seriously messed up" seems like such a Brass remark - he's observant, pithy and right on the mark. And I had to laugh wryly at "It was like a train wreck." I'm a big fan of Brass and you capture him perfectly. Using Brass to help tell the story of what we didn't see in the finale worked wonderfully well, and G & S's emotional rollercoasters rang very true. Thank you, smacky! |
| EvaristePoche 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was so moving. And kind of fitting that Grissom's declarations and manifestations of love come via a third party! Ali x |
| ayesha-s 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseoh that was so sweet!! love it! |
| gsrshipper 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuse:) This was great. I loved this conversation between Brass and Sara. Realistic and sweet. :) |
| LOCISVU 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really fatherly of Jim to talk to her. |
| ATrueParrothead 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseHello love, what a wonderful bit of fluff. If I had known all I had to do to get something this wonderful was to ask, I would've asked months ago. Beautiful story. I always love the way you write Brass as well. I'm already thinking of my next story idea! |
| vsky 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! The imaginary and characterization was dead on without over sentiment! Thank you for this gem! |
| sara-sidle-csi-3 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseomg... I wish her was my dad, but seeing that my dad ignores me, gee!! Can i cry!? It was so good! Inspirational! feel free to email me!: liztresemer at yahoo dot com @ . (wont let me put it in email form) Thanks, God Bless, Elizabeth |
| Andsowego 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was so nice :) My fave line for a laugh was “Please don’t put those images in my head. I’ll have to bleach my brain.” LOL Gotta love the Brassman! Andsowego |
| shania1277 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story & I LOVE BRASS :-)This little heart to heart between them is so touching and so sweet.Thanks a lot for sharing it with us , I love it ;-D |
| leafsgirl 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abusei just love me some fatherly brass. perfect! it made me sigh at the end. awesome stuff! |
| CSI Clue 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseWhat a lovely, richly detailed story! I love the way you lay things out and bring it all together--beautiful job! |