WOW brillaint...i ahve you on alerts cos i know how fantastic you writing is and jump when i see your name in my inbox!!
really heart wretching and pure pleasure to read
thankz
Ali
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Bittersweet and beautiful.

I so loved that, it gave me chills. So sad. Great writting!

I felt thins kind of tug in my chest while reading that. the last bit was abolutly brilliant. i loved it!

Heartbreaking! So sad!

I could really picture the graveyard etc. Well done!

Oh wow. Oh this is fantastic, absolutely fantastic! It made me cry! Really well done, this is so good! So simple, but so sad! I love it! Even if it did make me cry. Very well done, absolutely fantastic oneshot!