Loved it.

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Ending it here is fine. You're chapter lengths where fine. I really like the fact that you allowed Pan to go SSJ, I've had more fights than I can imagine with people about females going SSJ.

GREAT! i really like the plot. The story was so CUTE!

i say you should continue. i usually dont read this stuff but you have a way of writing it that i wish i could achieve... anyway, good stuff.

PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPPYS!

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS FIC. PLEASE CONTINUE, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

did u abandon this ficcy? plz update, and e-mail me when u do...if u do

Continue! Continue! Continue! You must continue!

You have to! You must! Please!

I love it! You should continue! I wish I was as good as you lol. You make storys enjoyable.

Byez

JoJo

PLease Continue This is such agood story!

could you please update?

continue it! i wanna see the women calm down! lol

I looove it! wonderful. I'd like to see it continued.

Congratulations on being married! I, for one, have no qualms about the age difference between Trunks and Pan. My only complaint is when writers write say he's in his thirties, but then write him as a teenager. You, my dear, are the exception! I love your T/P fics! They depict exactly how I'd wish their relationship to be. Thank you, thank you very much! :)

Hey! Its Me Again! I Just Wanted To Say That Your Other Story "Fight Of Our Lives" Is Great! I Was Wondering When Are You Going To Finsh Your Other Story "Friends Forever"? I've Been Waiting For The 7th Chapter 'cuz I Gatta Know What Happenes!

White SeeD

sugoi! Another great ficcy! R u planning on writing another chapter?