Reviews for The Awkward Truth: The Misaki and Ohjiro Recital

Athena Waren 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseVery good but more description, and Misaki is one of those anime girls who is completely oblivious to everything around her and doesn't get mad. Also when Kotaro is disapointed there should be more description of his tone of vioce. More over, when you switch from Misaki's point of view, to Kotaro's you should say that you are by ending the sentance and putting in Kotaro's POV or just say something like this: Misaki heard Kotaro hand the phone to Hotoko. She could hear Hotoko's small fingers grasp the phone as she lifted it up to her ear to speak.((Not my best literary work but still, I tried.)) Misaki usually freaks out in her room. So if she is mad you should have her in her room. I mean this as constructive critisism, not as abuse. I'm a hard judge. I can't help myself. Sorry if I offended you. But other than those problems it was an interesting plot.
Mireillle 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseher uncle.. O_O..
Aquarius101 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseHey my V for Vendetta friend. Damn your story is good but put emotions into it like when Kotarou was dissappointed. Hmm.. its getting interesting.perverted thoughts comin* how well don't hate me; see u monday! -Devi
dreamthis-song 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseOh! I like what you ahve so far even though it was sort od short. ^_^; Update soon! -xArtistic