point 1: The monkey's last name is Oikony.
point 2: The story didn't have one, so why should the review?

Well, that was really random... It was funny though. Good job

Not something to be taken seriously. Luckily, I didn't. I laughed, I'll admit.

Wow...I LOVED IT! Oh my god that was halariouse. Zelda and StarFox together! Its like heavan! Whoo! That was sweet...congrads

Alright, we need to establish a fact. Random stories can be good, but they can also be not so good.

People, take note of this as one of those "not so good" random stories.

You could improve on this if it were made longer, shoot for around 1,0 words. Also, if you really want a suggestion, try drinking three Cokes before writing your chapter.

Give it another shot if you want to...but don't repeat your mistakes, please.

~Ice Fox~

P.S.: If you want to see one of the situations in which random humour does turn out well, read "Starfox Vs. Puberty" by YoshiCookie.

This is a perfect situation in which I can say... WTF??

This story is just not funny. It's just unhumerous random nonsense.

Random can be good, but this story is not an example of funny random.

-OrangeKat

... nope