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Hillstar123
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
I didn't exactly like that way it ended. It doesn't explain much about what happened and left it a little hazy for me. But then again it leaves things open for the imagination. I just wonder whether or not I won't have withdrawls about this story. I loved it so much ;-; And Now I've finished. I'm starting on your next story of course, but it's not the same. You are a great writer. I would love it if you turned out more stories about the two characters, but I'm sure you'll do magic with anything you write. I love Strawberry Panic, but I found a better appreciation of the two of them so much more now that I've read this. Kaname Kenjou is my favorite character. Kudos big time for this story. Please write another Strawberry Panic Story!!
Skya
2008-12-19 . chapter 76
I loved this story. But it did take me quite long to review. As of date, I've reread this twice or thrice even though it is so LONG! Lestaki, you're BRILLIANT! I loved the way you develop the characters of Kaname and Momomi. It is very deep and humorous, even though I always got lost together with the characters' thoughts. It was kind of a sad thing that it ended. I would love this to go on, after all, you can't get too much of a good thing right?

I hope to get to read more of your stories. Perhaps you can start another? =)
Hillstar123
2008-11-26 . chapter 76
OMG! I printed out this entire story To read it when I'm not on the computer. I printed it all out so I wouldn't have to wait for anything out of complete desire to read it. I've stayed up numerous nights all night just to read this story. I freaking love it. It's so well put together and I can't imagine how proud you are of it. I swear that if I get to know anyone in the publishing business I'll refer you to them in an instant. I'm currently on chapter 40 and can't wait to read the next part. I know for a fact that I'll be up late tonight reading as much as I can. And The HUMOR. Omg you are a freaking genius xD. If you owned Strawberry Panic I would own every copy of the dvds. I can't wait to finish this one and then start on your next story about Mai Hime. And then Kannazuki no Miko. Gosh I can't Wait. But look at me I'm rambling I'm sorry. But I do have to mention how my mom wants to glare at you a little, Cause We'll be sitting in the living room her on the computer and me in the recliner reading and I'll bust out laughing and she gets so annoyed. I would love to meet you or at least talk to you. I think it would be my dream omg. I'm such a huge fan it's ridiculous. xDD Okay okay I'm almost writing a page. Shutting up now. Keep up the great Story writing. I LOVE IT!! :]
Diana
2008-10-24 . chapter 19
ok so I just finished chapter 19. When are momomi and kaname going to confess their for each other. It's very irritating. Not that this story isnt good. Because it is. The most well put together story I've ever read on fanfiction. Still. I very want this moment to happen and I just want to know how much longer it will take me to get there.
You can emial me at (and yes my obsession is quite apparent)
RykenBelmont
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Wow. Very well done...

That's all I can really say, to be honest.

Well done.
Anonymous-kun
2008-05-25 . chapter 76
Shit, you must have done this story like two chapters a day or something. Damn. This story is long and awesome. It is an epic FTW.
f.s.mercredi
2008-05-09 . chapter 76
one of the best stories i've read so far. well-written, charming and witty lines, great story flow. love it.

thank you for making an enjoyable fic. more power to you. ^_^
Gavril
2008-02-16 . chapter 76
It has certainly been a journey, finishing "Astrea Lake". This is one of the longest and enjoyable fanfiction that I have read thus far. Hence, thank you, for spending great time and effort in planning out such a fic and seeing through it till the end :)

I liked how you have mnaged to develop the complex personalities of both Kaname and Momomi, not only through their interaction with each other, but also with the other OCs in the fic, who have been bestowed intricate and complicated personalities. They have certainly not been sidelined despite being "side characters".

I am awed by the amount of thought put into "Astrea Lake",and this makes it seem as though "Strawberry Panic" was just merely child's play! Since chapter 76 signals the end of this wonderful piece of work, it also means that i shan't have to keep late nights to catch up with any more chapters ;)
Useful Oxymoron
2007-11-25 . chapter 69
Alright, back on track now. :)

-“Hey! Why does she get to be a ‘chan’? I’m not the only violent tomboy here!”- Heheheheh...

Shion the spy is... well, decidedly creepy, that's for sure. She kinda reminds me of a Ferengi in that respect (the mentality, not the looks) : Always know about your customers before they walk through your door.

As for Koike, well, she gets more devious/annoying every line she has in the story, especially the 'teenage fickle love'-thing. Let's see what the Duo has in store for her. :)

Looks like Koike has her own agenda (duh), but investing her time in Amane? Poor girl doesn't have a hope...
Useful Oxymoron
2007-11-25 . chapter 2
-“On the contrary, I’ve been savouring the time you’ve been away. That peace is gone, now.”- Heheheh, Kaname is as Kaname does. :)

I hate to think about the sheer amount of intrigue that'd be going on at an all-girl school (or a private school in general for that matter), but if the intrigue that is going on in your story is anything to go by, it's vast.

Kaname's backstory was deep and touching, as was Momomi's reaction to it. Enemies? I doubt they were actually ever enemies, but give them their own time to realise what the truth is.
Useful Oxymoron
2007-11-14 . chapter 68
Well, Eida seems properly annoying. Shion is much nicer. :) Hirai seems nice too, even a little shy... Oddly, though, even though Momomi considers insulting someone like Hirai to be bad taste/sportsmanship, it still feels as if she's a shark circling around her prey.

Quite an influx of new character voices here. Nagasawa and Koike seem like a right pair, alright.

-A few minutes later, Shion arrived, looking down at them. “Well, how are you getting on?”- Not at all, actually. :) Geez, I've never seen so many below the belts in that conversation since, well, ever... :)

-“Well, that’s not my business,” Momomi retorted happily. “It’s got nothing to do with me, after all.”- Ah, there's the Momomi we know and love. :)
waterxeno
2007-11-07 . chapter 76
i'm still amazed with myself.. i manage to finish this so super duper long multichaptered STORY!

LOVE TO READ MORE OF YOUR FUTURE FICS!
Useful Oxymoron
2007-11-07 . chapter 67
"The difference is that one of them can fly. Take note, Hikari."

After reading that, I just had to ask: Did you say that to convince Hikari to excel and become more than she is... or just a cheap ploy to get her to hurl herself off a cliff towards an early death? :D

Fluff is good, very good. And if even K & M (I wonder who those two could be, hm... :D) demand it, you'd better deliver. :) And you did spendidly!

"Yuho shrugged. “It’s obvious, isn’t it? With you and Amane-san… of course you always lost. Competing with her is a pointless exercise. She’s a genius, after all.”" Gr, correction... maybe Amane could hurl herself off a cliff towards an early death. But knowing Amane she'd probably sprout wings during the fall and fly off into the sunset.

"Knights are quite romantic" HAH! Kaname hit the hammer on the nail there. Reading history for six years has a tendency of sucking the romance out of every aspect of history. Those six years have been the most entzauberung and most enlightening time of my life.

Classic Momomi and Kaname conversation about truth. Heheheh, as usual, it's in the eye of the beholder.

"Kaname pinched Momomi’s cheek playfully" Aww. Am I the only one who thinks this is insanely cute.
Tuume
2007-11-04 . chapter 76
Though I haven't reviwed much, I've been following this story for some time now. You put the anime's script writers to shame. That is the truth, no lie. The drama was all over the place, yet still laced with a bit of love, sensibility, and introspection here and there. It would be awesome if you did a second story. A Yaya and Tsubomi perhaps? Check me out if you ever get the chance.
dianarra rose dionicio
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
h!..
i
really,
really,
like,
this...
story...

i..
wish...
everyday...
you..
will...
put...
a...
new...
chapter...

thankx
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